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it takes to chapter 9 for you to actually get a plot like where he starts to move and it's not just system notifications and even then it's still not a lot of the story it's very slow and it's kind of annoying I almost describe it as a slow burn for the action because there is none it's his servants talking behind his back and him getting points for it like I don't know how long it takes before he starts to fight back
Amazing novel author keep up the good work but please we need update so please an please always update the novel please...............................
I have not read the story nor do I plan to do so, but I give it 5 stars to try to compensate for the lot of bigoted creeps who are unable to bear that there are people who like a controversial genre like the NTR. It's a shame how underdeveloped this genre is, especially when it has so much potential to develop human relationships.
Me: reading the description Me: sees level 999Me: that’s what I like ????? It over 140 characters Not really it not but now it is over 9000
Filled with small mistakes to the point it's glaring right in the face of reader.From the update dates it appears that Author either posted this novel somewhere else before, made a rewrite(unlikely) or wrote for himself and finally decided to try out by posting it here, as such the update are haphazard at best.The background took unnecessarily too long amounting to mostly filler.Story progression makes little sense.Characters are very two dimensional and I might be wrong, but to me a quite a few characters are evil solely for the sake of being such rather than due to some deeper reasoning.The world background seem to be on a backburner as it appears that author is more interested in keeping whatever story he has in mind going full speed rather than slow down and think from the perspective of a third party such as the reader, leaving most of his thoughts about the story and world as simply that - Thoughts!
Good story and good author but the story updates should be more frequent. Characters are well designed. Story is also well directed. Please increase the number of updates posting.
This is a strange novel with all the elements that should make it an awful book..1) Brutal and violent tsundere FL2) Dumb male lead3)Omnipotent systemAND YET!!!I could not stop reading this novel once I started it!10/10 would recommend
Remember reading this in a forum. Its not that bad actually. Reason to 5 star, i just cant stand seing a game element rate to low.So... bite me.Not 140 char yet.
Honestly kind of feels like Divine Monster Transmuter. dndjdjdjdjdjjjdjhrudjruduuddjdjfjffjjfjfjfjffjffjfjfjfjfjffjfjfjjfjfjfjffjfjfkfjjfkfjf
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hohohohohohohohoho i cant remember what kind of novel had women laugh like this (i havent read this novel atm, im just talking about other novels) sounds like santa... or the gnome meme