A very interesting and well written story, with well developed characters. This story is a must read and is a good job author. Keep writing and keep up the good work?
This is indeed a thriller/ mystery novel. With its morse code puzzles and secret messages, it gives off a vibe of one as our mc, the female reporter, is abandoned after being framed as a murderer.
However, I have a few issues:
1. I believe I sense several plot holes that could be addressed. Now I may be wrong and not understanding something, but do keep in mind that the reader shouldn’t be mixed up either as it breaks off the immersion. First is to why did the person, who messaged our mc, give a coded message in the computer that pointed to their meeting place ? Was he trying to contact his fellow accomplices on the same computer ? ( this is not quite realistic compared to how clean the murder occurred; makes me think of a novice murderer as he could have used a burner phone in a back alley instead of potentially getting seen by people ) Why don’t both protagonists share this information to the police, or at least to her lawyer ? ( I know it may not be safe, or the criminal could escape, but she should at least be cleared of the charge ! )
2. There are some run-on sentences, and I noticed a certain section was repeated in one of the chapters. The only thing I can say is to read and sift through you chapters before and after writing as you might catch major plot holes just by rereading in a reader’s perspective.
3. Truth be told, the flow is super fast, and due to the plot holes, it feels a bit lacking. Not that I have anything against a quick plot, but I feel like it needs to be fleshed out more. This is just my personal opinion though.
All in all, the intrigue is there, so don’t give up ! You have potential just waiting to be polished. Keep up the good work, Author !
Mc is very charismatic and fun. So, I ask you to ignore any stupid readers who don't know how to appreciate the good humor of parody. It was a pleasant surprise to find a history of cultivation that does not have to be killing all the men that appear. Antagonists can even become friends, and that's one reason I appreciate the story. ( Because the webnovel is full of little boys who look at all other men as their enemies, just because they are men and do not have a pussy to ****, so most do not appreciate male friendships, and I see this as the height of idiocy) I would certainly like to see more of your work, perhaps a One Piece fanfic (Your mood is very much in line with One Piece.) Keep up the good work.
So here it is...
I read the much I could...
why not the latest !??
cz of the poor choice of mc the author picked.
the story base is good ...
all details so far is also good...
language or writing is also good...
but the most disappointing thing is the way author put yhe story together...
he wanted a comedy story but the way i found it at least is a crap drama type...
*no offense author*
then the mc...
well he was supposed to be a comedy mc yea...
but him being such a shitty piece of work and lame piece of shit with all he does and well as his way of doing things is bad ...
for me at least...
some might like it but i couldn't...
the story has very good potential ...
if the mc can be improved then it can be made into an awesome story...
now some might say why does a comedy mc needs to be good in the head or something...
well mind you people...
doing shenanigans doesn't need a brain dead shitty fk mc...
even a calm or intelligent mc can do it...
and mind you nobody is perfect yea...
and i don't expect him to be intelligent but at least use all the options available to to the best possible way etc...
well whatever...
hope the author improves these things...
and if not just delete this review...
Just wanted to give my view point so it will develop more...
cz it's a very interesting concept and story line...
well keep it up...
I love it! It's a stable and fluent read as I did not see any mistakes in grammer/etc. yet (ch. 36) (could be because my low english skills but I think its perfectly done).
Can't say anything 'bout the updating stability yet as I binged it but it says 11 chapters a week ... great!
The story development is kinda slow compared to other novels (again, could be because I usually binge read 100 to up to 500 chapters at once) but its perfect for a story with a blacksmith as protagonist as actual forging is an important part of such novels. Didn't even find plotholes yet, but alot of humourus references.
And last but not least the worlbackground. It's really well done. Without trying to spoil too much it seems to be a post apocalyptic world but not the normal nuclear bomb scenario but it uses the climate change. This gives birth to interesting and new enemies and enviromental conditions. A (in my eyes) unique and nice approach to the genre.
I don't usually read revenge novels as the MC always seem to either fall in love or form a harem, which defeats the character of a cold, ruthless MC ruins the story, but I'm glad this revenge plot have neither!
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Come adventure with Yuki, make money, kick butt, and slap thots.It has a mix of everything, school life, vr games, and a princess who needs some lovin.(Ps. Be sure to vote so you can make author give extra chapters)
A novel that those who have not experienced death cannot understand. Where the protagonist is given the task of making the lives of those people who died more glorious
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
This is actually a very interesting novel so far and got me hooked . Grammar is a little bad but still understandable so it's alright for now. Seems good until now and I hope it grows into another big thing because this seriously have a lot of potential. And I am not very good with English either so... yeah it's all good in my eyes . Keep it up author.
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