Bro please don't drop this... story it fire
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Well this is your typical writer, writing a review for his own work.
totally not based and I'm definitely not doing this for the troll line heh heh :)
-A bit of a shaky start, but it gets better.
-The chapters are longer than average. So if you saw the number of chapters and thought "Nah I want books with more chapters to binge read." don't let that be a deal breaker.
Too early to say anything else, but still leaving a review so more people may find it.
Best of luck, LC_Icey.
The only mistake of this work was not to continue............................................... Uma das melhores obras que já li ou conheci, pelo fato de ser quase exatamente a historia que eu sinto vontade de escrever, mas ainda tenho esperança de que algum dia continue.(PORTUGUESE)
like the novel so far I don't particularly love how the mc and his friend are crazy over their fav game characters hope they mature enough so yeah so far i like the novel i just hope the mc changes and stops going crazy everytime his fav character appears.
I'll give it to you author, the world background has a steady foundation, and the characters are a bit generic but nonetheless good, but the strongest point I believe comes from the story's plot development which is pretty smooth and yeah, I guess the main character really is unfortunate.thanks for the good read Author, continue because you have my interest, so I wish to see more
The way you described Ibrahim...he sounds just like what I wanted to be...I don't mean being a mafia but having a strong aura just like him. I really liked the character's description. Best of luck in finishing it. I am hoping for a lovely ending with our fmc.
HUGE INFODUMPS! And author constantly repeats the same thing OVER AND OVER AND OVER again.
Also, one chapter he introduces a new rule of this book, later he will break this rule.
Let me put it this way. The normal conversation in this novel goes like this,
Mc says something.
The person mc is talking to replies with unfamiliar terminology.
Author takes 3 paragraphs to explain.
The mc replies with unknown terminology again.
Author explains using 3 paragraph again.
Every conversation is a tool for the author to dump huuuuge info that will probably never be mentioned again.
30 chapters in and VERY LITTLE has actually happened. But boy oh boy you probably know about half of all technical details on how fey, fey grades, fey characteristics, various companies, tools, fey cultivation plans used in this book's universe.
Also, to the review that said no system, that is true. But the mc has a huge all encompassing cheat when it comes to feys. Not a bad thing per say but just mentioning.
Dialogue is VERY dry because of the constant info dumps in them. So i s the exposition. And whenever any character in this story is feeling something, like happiness or anger, the author explains exactly why that character is feeling that, why the mc mad them feel like that, what the mc thinks about that character, etcetc you get my point.
I mean the readers aren't dumb. the author doesn't have to explain why the mc's sister is feeling happy when the mc got her a good fey. But the author does, line by line, breaking down what she was feeling.
Also, in this world it is apparently really hard for people to train something called 'runes'. But the mc just has to look in a certain random direction and recite poems. Then boom, new rune.
Author said only contractors can choose skills for fey, but a few chapters later we see people choosing skill for fey not contracted to them.
Author spends HUGE TIME explaining how things work, but when executing them in the book he literally throws all that out of the window and lets the characters break every rule he established.
Oh and don't get me started with FEYS. Random fey appears, author takes a chapter to explain all the characteristics of that fey.
Like he does that for almost every fey. Even the ones not related to mc or any major character.
This is not a novel, it is one GIANT INFO DUMP or MONSTER ENCYCLOPEDIA. Not recommended.
I actually really like this novel.I first read it on an MTL website and since then I read the 2 new updates chapters on it every morning.The story is interesting and kinda for people who like fantasy wish-fullfillment. I would really appreciate it the translation speed could be improved
I BINGE-READ IT NOW I NEED MORE! IT MADE ME LAUGH AND GAG. THIS IS ACTUALLY THE FIRST COMEDY I READ HERE IN WEBNOVEL! HERE’S A POWER STONE FOR YOU *sends* GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST, BY THE WAY!
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.