This is good. Story’s good. Like, really good. Really good storytelling. The characters are more than just outlines personality. Except for some parody characters. It’s all just pretty neat. So all in all, pretty good.
I'm sorry to say this but i could read only till the chapter 3. Normally i would give it change, because i genuinely like harem genre and rarely drop a novel involves a harem route.
But your novel feels like a causal conversation between 2 people due to your writing and narrative. Sometimes i can't understand what's happening due to things developing randomly and fast without having a proper explanation and building.
Like he casually says he's from another word and she shouldn't say anything about it. But she just straight accepts it. No questions? No thoughts or precautions before revealing you're from another world? It seems everything is OK.
So, the “stuck in game” plot has been done so many times that I can’t even count, but this is still such a good read! The beast taming and the game mechanics all work together. It’s just great.
Author-sama! Keep it up, fighting!
An idiot with annoying female characters who pressure him to do things for them. At first it was funny he was trying to be liar but he wasn't a good one. What makes it worse is he time travelled and he uses classics whether it is music or movies and highly makes them so cheap and undeserving. if you are gonna copy at least make good use of it.
Pretty good start I'd say. Keep on writing author. I think the character development in your story is really good particularly. Good job!!!!!!
I’m like 80% I already reviewed this book but the review disappeared so imma be lazy and instead of the several paragraph review that is supposed be here I’ll give a summary instead of my old review
Amazing job on your MCs ability most authors even with said ability would rarely kill MC but in your book he dies several times in some chapters so good job on that
I know that was a lazy bad and uninspiring review but whatever too lazy to type anything longer sorry
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I wish there are more chapters to read. Been searching for novels like this forever a good read for leisure .. it can always put ya into sleep with a good dream
I still haven't read yet but you got your idea from the tutorial tower of the advanced Player and I like that I will wait for a few months later to read please make it good OK !!
I have read King's Avatar before so when I started reading your story, it really reminded me of that reading experience. It is really good.
The story is perfectly written and seems to be in sync so far.
Although it is a very early review, I must say that your story has high potential.
Keep up the good work. :)
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I'll try to keep this short this time, hehehe. You did a good job at portraying the main character. An Arrogant kid and immature, he was portrayed well and I commend you for that. Interesting concept you have made here, and your narration makes the story more easier to dive into. Anyways, great book you have here, keep up the good work