DO YOU TRUST ME?

Wow! I love it! Please continue the story. I like mystery novels. I would sure follow this one. I just noticed the dialogue of each character should be properly separated. But over all, nice writing and the plot is interesting.

ok... it seems like an interesting story and the tension builds up real quick, there are too little chapters right now to give a concise decision about the story. The characters seem interesting though...honestly, I kinda feel they were too quick to blame the FL for the murder but after switching perspectives, it seemed more legitimate. Overall the story has potential. So do check it out.

It seems interesting. Just build up on the scenes before moving to the next one. This makes the book more full of suspense and scene that can make the plot more detailed.

*inhale* This book is good, especially with people who likes faster books. (maybe a little too fast? The Mc is theown at you right away, I guess for conveinence. I understand that you will develop the character, through the book. Try showing not just telling us who bshe is.) If you care a lot about story and and mysteries, go ahead, you'll love this book.It is a really good book, and for a person who doesn't really like this genre of books, I'm adding it to my library easily.

Only two chapters and yet one can still tell how much thought has been put in this story. The plot is suspenseful and nail-biting! I personally am addicted to this thriller and mystery genre so I'm no doubt addicted. The main character really draws me towards the background as well! I hope you publish more chapters soon!

I don’t like romance nor female lead, although it seems you have male lead too (unless I read that wrong).
Your story has potential and interesting, especially since you have a mystery aspect to it. The mystery is what brings people into the story.
You have grammar mistakes, especially a lot of places that need commas. Remember, commas make a difference and the story flow better. Without the commas, it is like everything is together.
Other than that, your story has potential, keep up the good work!