Dear author, I'm loving what you're trying to do and want to succeed, so I'm letting you know what I think from an outside perspective.I can see how much you're influenced by COTE. However, it seems like you're seeking the rewards of the mystery instead of writing a story.COTE has a vibe where seemingly normal interactions are twisted behind the scenes. For example, a woman has Ayanokouji cook for her in one book, similar to your cauliflower soup scene.However, Ayanokouji agrees because he's forced to. People are trying to get him expelled, and she has him cook for her to get him expelled, and he exposed her and didn't get expelled at the end. It's all interconnected.Your scene, by contrast, is just feeding the character's desperation to get him to love her without reason. Later, the scene is meaningless as the Ayato deduces a random ruse in an unearned development. Not the same.Also, duly note that COTE's entertainment factor that balances the lack of action is the games.I'm a bit frustrated because I can see your talent and potential, but didn't get what you can bring.I hope you continue writing this style of novel. I'll look forward to your next work as you learn and improve.Thanks for writing! ?
a novel where above 15chapter is a new world introduce every chapter though the world is 1 chapter only and it is rush introducing the plot from the movie or books then change only a few things inserting mc presence in the plot and ordering people taking leadership role of the heroes and world making sure mc doing something on the chapter so the chapter can be send out some of the female characters quickly fell in love with mc by meeting him half a day maybe less and over all it is an ok novel if you want a super fast pace novel
It's er gen's latest work and we all know how great of a writer he is! I was following the MTL before coming here and couldn't be happier that someone like Lordbluefire has picked it up. Hope u deliver another fantastic translation to us!Now, I kind of liked how it is translated as "Beyond Time" everywhere else. Also, the novel has a dedicated cover in the CN version, so why use this third-rate one? Finally, please update the summary of the novel.
Hello, the author here. Just reviewing my work in order to promote it, and offer the readers some idea of what to expect. This is my fourth novel, and the one I'm most proud of. My main focus when writing has been on creating believable characters and relationships that we can empthaise with. The plan for the rest of the story - I feel - is pretty exciting, so I hope you'll stick around for the ride. Thank you.
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Rather than new crap every week, I'd rather they focused more effort on finishing the stories they've already started. Especially some of the good stories that seem to have been totally dropped, like Dark King, which hasn't had a new chapter in ten months...
As of chapter 14 (newest at this point in time)I am in love with this book! Although I will be sad when this goes premium. I love the idea, especially how the mc is a npc (not really because he is alive but to the players he is an NPC) It is a really nice take on how npcs view the players. I am super sad that only 2 chapters come out a day and not the whole book but their is nothing I can do about it. It is also a lot better than this being a dropped book. If that did happen I would die of book withdrawal. Luckily we don’t need to worry about that as this is a paid book and has over 500 non translated chapters. How much do you think Webnovels translators get paid?
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In his past life, Li Fang was a talented cardiologist. However, after a botched surgery that resulted in the death of his patient, he was stabbed and his soul transmigrated to another world.
Now in the possession of the body of Ning Xiaochuan, a man incapable of learning martial arts due to heart disease, Li Fang cures the disease and makes an astonishing discovery about his heart. This discovery will ultimately bring about the hidden potential Ning Xiaochuan was capable of.
Join our hero as he works to survive in the new and deadly world.
It makes me sad there are "not enough ratings" if its a fucking 5.0 rating.
So pls let it showcase how good it is....................................
Hm.... Well....... Its not original? And also the **** with you, your just copying the overlord anime the hell with you so disappointing its just a fake booooooooo I hope this dissappears here **** you never ever copy overlord anime if it's fan fiction it's OK but the **** with you you just copied the thing
Trying best on this chapter,Eventhough there are some spelling mistakes!But i kind of find it Good myselfe lol.
It will be hard so support is needed,hope we enjoy what is next!!