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Beautiful content.Characters are very interesting.Ricol, a unique character and Jake and John are good characters. Very nice story. Agirl with super power. A loveable character.
Okay. Here is an honest review of what I think of the story so far. As of right now there are 28 chapters so anything in the comment may not be true anymore. Also I won't spoil anything.
So. First of all what do I think of the story. It is a good story. And I mean that. It has an interesting idea, and has some really (at least to me) cool super powers, and monsters. It has some interesting character that I do hope to see expanded on. While I do feel some can do better I personally don't hate any of them. Secondly. The grammar is good, but in terms of that I am heavily biased. I have been reading so many stories that have so many mistakes that after reading this one it was refreshing. Now it does mess up so it is by no means perfect. Hell it does have a few mistakes in writing now that I think back on it but compared to some of the other 'stories' I have read a few mistakes are things I can forgive. Now for what is the biggest problem I have with this story.
The length of it... This story is a massive slow burn! It takes like 20 chapters before the plot starts working... Now usually I wouldn't mind that but the chapters are so God Damn long... Like stupidly long... There's a point where there are 5 chapters all with at least 5k words in a row!!! Now look. I do like long chapters, but damn! Now if you like long chapters than you'll like it. Now I will say it does seem to be speeding up? Maybe? I dunno. The plot seems to be moving now which is good... But seriously I hope those chapters start to get shorter considering the fact that with the massive chapters and the slow burn plot it can be annoying.
Thankfully I do like the characters, and there are some funny jokes that keep me in.
So all in all if you have time go ahead and read this. But be warned as it will take time to finish this one...
just some basic op reincarnation due to rob shenanigans. also this should be in the fanfic area. i wish people would at least do better character insertion just make them a original inhabitants why do you always need them to world hop there
I am surprised to see this many favorables reviews. the mc is supposed to be a man more than a thousand year old but when he reincarnated he started to act like a teenager and the only thing he's good at is keep repeating " I'm the best " . The story is like every other Chinese novel , there's the weird little sister with unknown origins who has a particular constitution , the arrogant young nobles and the idiot mc . The writing quality is also bad , there's many grammatical errors and some forgotten words and letters.
I don't think my review has any real meaning coming from an inexperienced writer such as me, but I'll give my views on the story anyways.
So from the first few chapters, there were many, many descriptions. Much so that it cut some fights and actions halfway, leaving me in awkward reads once in a while (though that's what I just observed).
There was also shifts in narration perspective, leaving me confused from time to time on whether the narrative of the story is in first-person or in third-person omniscient (I just figured out that every chapter that starts with "memories of..." is in first-person perspective, so yeah).
I also wasn't too invested between the characters, you know, having too many introduced in the first few chapters. It left me feeling like "I don't really care if Velsado dies or whatevs..." and more of like "When are the powers and magic stuff gonna come again?" Yes, I think I'm back to being a nine year old.
Although many things broke my immersion with the story, I really found the richness of the worldbuilding complete. The concepts of the story is unique, and I honestly don't know where the story will go (Although being predictable once in a while is a good thing). The many characters interacting with the world events, it really felt like a very much solid story where I don't think plotholes will arise (unlike in mine where I'm still fidgeting to fix loose ends).
If you reached this part of my review, then thank you for reading. Hope you'll kinda get something out of my review although I'm still new to writing myself. I just limited my review to the writing quality, story progression, characters, and worldbuilding if that's okay.
Cheers!
booom ya love this story. I am the number ten to rate this what sup people. I recommend for ya to read this novel it is amazing ya will love it
I thought it was good but I would like to see there be a dog or some sort of animal so it would be Intriguing to some readers
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Terrible writing quality, couldn't get to chapter 2 so I'll just put 4 to everything but writing quality.........................................
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