A Good book. Writing quality is good. Good grammar. World building is fine as well.
Some of the more complicated parts can be hard to understand at times, but the translation is pretty good, and the chapters seem to come out rather consistently which is also definitely a plus.
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I have read the first few chapters , and I go to say , the storyline is very intresting and the narration is awesome. So far so good. I would request the author to release a prequel to this novel about Valentine's life before death.
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Honestly. I enjoyed the beginning but then there are some critical things that don't make sense at all. His power level is inconsistent and literally don't know anything about how strong he is compared to others. World building also doesn't make sense as well. Ascension isn't described properly so clueless regarding that. Basically Mc is as strong as the author wants him to be at any given point so you always have no clue how strong he is.
This first chapter was on fire. But I am surprised by how weak the author has made the MC. ig this will change. thanks again for such a good book
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It started of great but after reading until 40 chapters, some characters temperament or personality seems unfitting for their image the way the author portrays them. Makes me cringe when I try to visualize a Venerable Dragon saying the most weird stuff. It has a really good starting point and potential however it went lackluster and out of taste. This is just my opinion and no hate to the author.
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Great story background could use a little more detailing like what year they are in and what the continent/ world they are in is called, I haven’t seen any other problems with the story it’s great every other way just needs a little more background knowledge
This novel is a whole mess. The main character makes stupid decision after stupid decision. Plot makes no sense main character still doesn’t have any agency within the story besides being a magnet for trouble and poor choices. Read this as a free novel and it quicklY falls apart after locked chapters. I’d stay away from this novel