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Very interesting. Please, when is the next episode coming out? I can't wait . I mean Henry you are too much. Please send the next episode please..
Hmm..I like the story, but when 20 chapters are spent on 1 game and MC turns from poor and weak to rich and OP in a 20 minutes game..Then you spend 30 chapters on another game where 5 chapters are spent talking about 3 sniper shots and how the MC had a sudden personality change halfway through..There started to be some gammar mistakes happening 30+ chapters in..Now the MOST annoying thing about this book.. This is EVERYWHERE;'Amazing', 'Truly Amazing', 'Absolutely Amazing''Scary', 'Truly Scary''Cool', 'So Cool', 'Really Cool''Regret', 'Regret so Much', 'Too much Regret''Thrilling', 'Too Thrilling', 'Wonderful Thrill''Lost?', 'Lost', 'Actually Lost''Crushed', 'Truly Crushed', 'Absolutely Crushed''Quiet', 'Silent', 'Dead Silent''Stiff', 'Incredibly Stiff''Smug', 'Really Smug', 'Too Smug''Pretentious', 'Too Pretentious''Crazy', 'Too Crazy''Kill', 'Kill You', 'Gonna Kill', 'Killing', 'Say Kill, Will Kill''Too Strong', 'Too Manly', 'Too Domineering''Incredible', 'Too Incredible'And Many More.. (some paragraghs are just complete Copy&Paste)THEY ARE REPEATED EVERY CHAPTER!!
Great book up until chapter 72 after that it just repeats everThing in the previous chapters not sure what happened or if it was supposed to do that
This book translation quality is good, but the names are all over the place. Logan Yu becomes Luocheng Yu and Seth becomes Lin Xu. The battles are boring asf. Especially if you never played league of legends before. I have no clue wtf they were talking about. And the battles are way too long. One match and it goes on for 10 chapters. I expected more of this author since be wrote a good book before.
This novel is great. Hoping for more chapter release.. I'm so eager to know what happens next. The plot is great, and i look forward to the MC being more well known and receive cool nickname and title
What a failure, posted the wrong chapterand then duplicated the newest oneREFUNDwould give 0 if I could /
Not so original and a lot of nationalism If you want to read same type of world setting with less nationallism and better quality go for '' Let Me game in Peace''with 1800+ chapters
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A very good novel. I enjoy it so far, and the enemies aren't the typical ones we see in other xianxia, they are different and seem to have a bit more to them.I won't say much about the MC, but if you can't handle a character that takes time to develop then this novel might frustrate you. But if you like seeing a character that takes time to flourish, then this novel is definitely for you.The updates are frequent which is a big plus for all on this platform. And I have to say this, I'm seriously wondering how "Legend of the Perfect Emperor" can have more power stones than this one; now don't get me wrong, I'm not dissing LotPE, but the updates are just so much better here.
Best novel ever!! Great storyline, really deep and strong character build. This novel can even make me laughing so hard, very entertaining! A must read novel!!
Odio infinitamente los autores que hacen a un MC con un sistema que solo sirve para hacer que el MC haga algo o muera, eso es una puta mierda, directamente no le dabas un sistema lo metías en la historia en modo extremo y listo