It's not bad. Your standard run of the mill story. Sword genius who is looked down on for not being able to cultivate, until one day...The cultivation levels start out similar to some other novels but change a bit as they progress.It doesn't seem to be a harem, so if you're looking for that, you're probably out of luck.The main character is similar to what I like to read. He's not bloodthirsty, but he also doesn't just let his enemies scamper off. Especially the ones who actually try to kill him. It seems to follow the pattern of meeting a strong enemy or organization, fighting until a stronger one appears, then running away and powering up to come back for revenge. For now anyway.
Disappointing Trash Novel.... I never rated novels because I thought even if I don’t enjoy it there may be readers who like it and I don’t want to make them feel bad but seeing this novel make me change my mind... The author can’t even write the synopsis right !!!!!Thought it was a cool female lead storybefore but I got a trash Male lead who canonly slaps randomly ...So disappointing.This novel looks like author just mixed everything he thought it will be interesting to the face slapping genre just to earn a quick buck..
I will start from the beginning ;)The cover page is original and catchy! The storyline is interesting, the main character also. You're doing a good job!On Webnovel I saw a lot of stories about zombies, monsters, ect... you've picked up a very difficult topic ;) I wish you an inspiration and a lot of great ideas so you could handle the topic well!All the best!
Just showoff your cultivation and then announce a coming threat. some people would certainly believe you and be willing to learn. Seems conviluted to just open a store and hope things work out
I just got one thing to say and this is repetitive fix that part of the story or this ends here if you wish for it to end then stay on this path if you choose to fix it and take a new path just read your own book, plot gets repeated again and again throughout the story and always ending in the same thing and that is villian leaves and mc has another problem again and again...
I read this book till chapter 75 but the pywall starts at chapter 6. I don't think the book is worth paying for but it's still way better than most things you find here.I could swear I have read this book or a part of it before, the plot seemed familiar. Maybe in my early webnovel days.I don't wanna spoil the plot but basically the MC gets rich and powerful after an inheritance. Yet he doesn't show off and still gets looked down on by his classmates for being poor. I really like this kind of hidden wealth and power stories. There's some face slapping involved but not that excessive and over the top like you would find in many other Chinese face slapping novels here. I like that.To the writing: There aren't any major mistakes or things to take note of. The writing quality is average. There's room for improvement to "fill in" the story and add a little more details. All the characters lack the same dept but it's still okay to read (not just worth the coins tbh).The story so far were the typical troubles hidden rich MCs come across in this kind of genre. Not bad but also nothing really outstanding and interesting.Still, you should check the story on your own and build your own opinion. It's worth a try, maybe you'll like it.
Hey guys! This is Vincestar here the translator for this novel, writing on behalf of my editor Miko too. Just want to point out a few things:1. To clarify with the confusion - Yes. Our novel is getting dual hosted on both here and webnovel :) We are the one scheduling publishing on both end.2. We are aware that there are missing chapters in the novel, and is looking to getting that fixed asap! But presently the system don't allow for us to "slot in" chapters. We can only translate what's available. So we are waiting for the management to get back to us on this :)3. If you want to speak to us, we have a discord channel that we frequently posts pretty fun stuffs over there. So you can check us out over there! https://discord.gg/xvjj4dA4. We also have a Patreon for readers who want to read ahead of the chapters that's available ! http://patreon.com/spsf
Much better character development, good story.But kinda confusing at the start, but great at opening multiple story direction. Not your average stupid Character with a special system cheat
One of the most enjoyable and intelligent reads I've come across in a long time. Most of the books in this genre tend to get too intense, even gory. But despite having a forensic pathologist and a criminal psychologist as the main characters, this story promises humour, fun, emotions in addition to thrill and suspense. Beautifully written, the characters are interesting and span the whole range of personalities, well balanced story, adequate dose of suspense and drama and emotions. And Levi's Irish charm is just the cherry on the top!A must read. I'm gonna read it at least a few times for sure.
I am just loving this book.. As I am an author aswell and write in the same genre, so personally speaking I am just loving this book.. I really-really-really am..
Okay, first and foremost I just want to say that this is an amazing story thus far. The chapters are long and the the writing style is very good. But, there were some mistakes, though minor, it would greatly help your readers if you could clean them, like typos, punctuation marks and capitalization. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!
There is no rhymn nor reason in how this story moves forward.