The novel is not bad! I like how it summarized most of the important topics rather than a lengthy one. Don't judge my opinion too much though, lol. It is just tiring to read multiple chapters of explanation/background then the author will give us 1 to 2 chapters of the fighting/climax only ?. Overall it is pretty decent for me
This is a very popular book on royal road for anyone who doesn’t know.
This novel is decent so far will update if it wins
it's kinda meh.. mc is kinda like a delinquent.. messing with others n their lives n all..MC is targeted by some random stranger everywhere.. usually ends up with MC dealing with that person immediately.. and an elder pops up to take revenge.. it always turns out that the elder is from 'New Church" (most evil organisation in the world) or is closely related.. Immediately someone pops up to save himSystem has consciousness n punishes him for thinking badly about the system n all.. When asked by MC to save him system simply says it'll find someone else instead.. MC almost got a grandpa(soul in a bead here) to follow him around but the system gave him an ultimatum.. have the system or the grandpa.. he gets rid of the grandpa(not killing.. almost like releasing).. cuz system wanted monopoly over him.. n MC probably would suffer to cultivate if system left him as his foundation is really bad and it's all piled up forcefully by the system.. so almost like a slave to the system I'd say
Novel was good until author made MC a r*pist and murderer. The one thing I can’t stand is MC r*ping women. Also when mc decides to go with his friends to massacre a city full of innocent people, (children included), because he’s bored? That’s all kinds of f*kd up.
So in the beginning I thought this novel had potential. The Cheat didn't seem too OP(I was wrong), the MC made some actually smart and careful decisions(that stopped completely somewhere after chapter 10) and the side characters seemed to have their own goals and thoughts(Didn't really change, thay just aren't relevant any more, except to boost the MC when it is convenient).So what went wrong?1. The cheat became the motherload of all stupid loot boxing mechanism. The advantages keept compounding(Breathing technique to gain 1XP per level with no actual effort/time investment after level 10) and every other skill is literally pay to win. I have not a single clue why the MC is even training anything besides the necessary amount to gain control of his own body. Archery training is especially useless.2. As mentioned above, the Breathing Technique is king, investing every available Exp in it is only logical and way more efficient than anything else the MC could do. It is not even explained why the MC stop investing after he rightfully recognized how important that skill is. It is just skipped out.3. Story got a lot more monotonous and boring after the Side-Characters stopped being relevant.
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Read this on scribblehub, titled as Unfathomable Senior. The MC is none at all "unfathomable" and only relates to the title ever so often when the author decides to mention that the surrounding pedestrians are so shocked every 10 chapters. The main storyline doesn't actually begin until chapter 30-40 when he finally decides to leave the beginner village to look for his family. So if you don't like 30 chapters of filler and repetitive plot, don't read this.
For some reason it will look good to some grand emperor to have some snot nosed brat descendants go and murder existing city lords in his own kingdom? Anyways sure let's go with that so snot nosed sh1thead X decides to murder MCs family for this reason because you know why the fxck not. So X get's a dragon egg somehow away from a dragon which is apparently stronger than any other GD bad@ss on the planet to plant on MCs father who is too tough to take on himself or have any of his cronies take on so yeah get the dragon to do it. Now at this point you might ask yourself how did they get the egg then if they can't even take on the father? Well you know what you can go fxck yourself they just did because the author is too GD lazy to explain that. So they plant the egg and remove whatever mystical barrier they have on the egg to keep the dragon from finding it while they have it. The dragon smells the egg from who the fxck knows where and travels who the fxck knows how far basically instantly and kills everyone of course and at the end the MCs mother pushes him off of a cliff with the egg. Well at this point the dragon just decides to say fxck it I have already traveled far enough for my dumb egg forget it and goes off somewhere else because the MC stays all broken and bloody unconscious for who knows how long while the egg hatches on him without getting WTF curb stomp killed by the dragon who can instantly travel who the fxck knows how far and will stop at nothing, except cliffs apparently, to kill everything and get its egg back. If you haven't had an aneurysm yet kudos you have some mental fortitude there so let me finish this up real quick: The egg hatches into TWO FXCKING dragons somehow and oh yeah of course they decide the MC is their mother so now they are his pets. What in the fxcking fxck did I just read? I wish I could puke out my memories of ever reading this.
The pacing is a bit slow but I feel it will get better with time. This novel has got a different feel to it, it isn’t a cliché start and the characters are likeable. This is my own opinion.
Concept is good but when mixed with a purposefuly dense or stupid mc it completely ruined the flow.?
It was a really nice chapter, keep up the good work. Although before publishing, you check for any mistakes in grammar. Overall, it's a lovely book and has great potential.