I have found that I care a lot about the characters and their eventual ends in this story, which is good. There has been a ton of character development and unique characters so I actually know who someone is when I read their name instead of skipping past their name because they're unimportant and bland. The side characters have major roles and they affect the plot in a big way.
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Good story so far. Keep it up and update more. There are some punctuation writing mistakes other wise good overall. It doesn't seem like English is your 3rd language.
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Author did a remarkable job making the characters alive and human. Honestly speaking while reading the first chapter I didn't feel like I was reading a book. It felt like I was talking to myself. you know some deep talk we all do with ourselves every now and then. Great job!! Keep it up Author??
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I'm new to these kind of Stories and this was the perfect start for me. A Well-written and engaging story with a good plot that hook you inKeep writing my friend.
Nice story line but it still a little bit similar to national high school prince is a girl but it still nice but u should learn to create ur own story style so readers will know ur work and appreciate it.
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It's okay? The spelling is absolutely atrocious at some parts so far, the confusion between reality manipulation and illusion is kinda baffling. Maybe it will be improved as author had mentioned somthing about a spoiler? But like if that was the case you should have just changed it in the first place if it would cause such issues.