Barnacleboy
" Hmm... Who is that girl? "
"I know..you're a good boy."
Alright, I'm either dead, in a coma, insane, or this is really happening.
Updates please..
"I am Master Change and this is Terra and Marra. Marra is the one that has short hair."
This is unfortunate. I enjoy the premise and overall concept of this story. The problem is that this story could be about an MC that has no special power or immortal life and nothing would change. The fact the MC does not age has no bearing on anything in this story. It has never come into effect at all. The only thing it does is let the mc think about how they are safe from time and that's it. Even though he is never in danger of time in the first place. The MC is scared and that's understandable I like a vigilant MC. What I hate though is an MC who has no feelings and has the power to help those around them with little to no effect on them and doesn't. It bothers me a lot. I have read 350+ chapters and the MC repeatedly does this.
Nice story. I’m curious how it will advance. Keep it up please!?
even though the MC has everything needed ... keep doing unnecessary things ... doesn't learn from his mistakes ...the author keeps forcing plots ... idk why... maybe for more words? or just has no clear plane for the novel...anyway keep the hard work Author ... am sure you will do better in the future...
the story is good i read so far i quite enjoying
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This is my first time reading a science fiction story and my impression of this book is. .. .IMPRESSIVE!! I love the author when he told us the details of his fantasy world and the way he does the storytelling too. Keep up the good job. .. .cheers! !!
good novel .
