Barnacleboy
The writing style is highly polished, and I can infer that the author based it off of more traditional novel styles. The method applied by the author in which they developed the world, plot, and character archetypes alludes to styles utilized by Tolkein, Faulkner, Austen, etc. Easy to comprehend, and there isn't a stress of dialogue. The presence of multiple main characters is interesting, and they're represented well. From what I'm reading, the characters are mostly reticent and not very outspoken, which is well complemented by the lack of direct statements of speech and thoughts, rather revealing their actions to implicitly display them instead. However, dialogue is indeed present in the latter portions of the novel. That it isn't abused or placed as the central component of the novel, is a refreshing find.The emphasis on worldbuilding in the prologue could be stretched over the first few chapters. However, it's still a good read nonetheless. Compared to the other novels in this database with their overemphasized, dramatic explosion of a beginning, this novel with a slow, more relaxed and indirect development of the plot is truly an interesting and refreshing find.
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And this is something that's going down on my library, you really did a good job writing this one. I love the settings and everything that's in it. The MC being Mr. Not the nice guy, caught my attention and I would love to see if any chemistry works between those two and he changes later due to some included and whatnot. Anyway, keep up the good work.
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I loved the movie I know I will love the book
Awesome. I like how you portray the main charachter, and the mystery of the Bossman. The name itself presents an intresting idea, and I am definitely wondering where this can go. Potential is high.
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It's not too bad I've seen a lot better but I've also seen a lot worse the only problem is with so many bad reviews on not sure if enough people will open chapters with coins to keep this story going
Somebody comment when there's 150 chapters
great slice of life type novel it's great the premises is that the master can't level up till he is on the end of his lifespan which makes it intresting as we can see how he lives a life where everyone he knows becomes stronger or dies before him so hope this get picked
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