very interesting.different from those plotsa very new plot with lots of interesting twist .specially the tamed beasts are so cute loved it❤️???❤️?☺️☺️☺️☺️
This is the first Harry Potter fan-fiction I have read on this site, and it's really interesting so far. I can't wait for future chapters to come and hope this does not get dropped ever. Thanks for reading my review~!
does anyone know where the author went? all I wanna do is finish reading his book
What can I say about an awesome story but it's has slow updates overall its interested and good.OK now I have nothing to say because I'm not good at giving reviews.
excellent book so far and really looking forward to the next chapters ................ zzzzzzxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxcghjjkkkjjhgdde
Hi guys, thank you for picking up my book to read, I promise you won't be disappointed, surely as the Author am going to rate my book 5 star.But this is my second novel and I put a lot of thought into the book before starting it, so feel free to express your thoughts through the comments section. Thanks.
As a great fan of Rebirth of the thief (CN) and Emperor of Solo Play (KR), this novel hasn't been impactful to me. To put it simply, I don't like how the MC act because It doesn't make sense (at least to me).The MC joined a gaming union in which he had to collect gold each week as a compensation for the renting fee of the Gaming Helmet. But, the problem arose when the Union's gold collection team was already full. He arrogantly said that he could gather 20 gold each week and the union accepted. (Voila, he got himself into a 3-months contract and he had to submit 20 gold per week to the union)The problem is, 20 gold is a HUGE amount. It's even equal to the Gaming Helmet's price (30,000$) (This is based on a chapter in which the author said that 63 silvers equal to 1000$, ****** math -> 20 gold = +-25,000$). Well, he managed to earn that much on his first day. But if he's that confident, isn't it better to get a loan from even a loan shark, duh?The game lore used a lot of names from WoW and other Blizzard-games and that's a minus to the originality. All in all, it's still an enjoyable read if you are pretty bored. But, Rebirth of the Thief and Emperor of Solo Play leave this novel in the dust.
I am deeply ashamed to say that I read this up to chapter 690. There was obviously flaws in the novel but overall the fighting was exciting to read. Also, the MC was interesting to say the least. He knew who he was well and had his own boundaries. However it started to degrade when the female lead arrived. At first it was subtle but as the novel went on it was simply emotional manipulation to help her parent to gain power. Also, this MC is the guy in most wuxia novels that spoil their daughters to the maximum and let them do what they like and have such horrible attitude. His way of raising his children is disgusting. He spoils his daughter too much and devalues his son and lets him become the protector and comply with her demands. That sort of mentality made me cut off my interest so quick. If that was not stupid enough, the daughter's crush was talking crap about him on his land openly and his daughter let him do it with her protection while his wife thought it was a minor thing and overlooked it. He failed as a parent. He is the worst parent I have read on Webnovel as a MC. His daughter has no respect for him at all, she even wanted to hit him and he was chill about it and said everything was his fault. I am done with this crap of a novel. I cannot believe I wasted so much. Also his wife is a such a bad mother, she made him apologize and orderes him make her daughter happy again. This might seem minor but what is the point being the strongest if your family are spoiled and rotten people no matter their talent? I wish he was single or at least didn't have children. It ruined his character. He knows the guy his daughter has a crush on has bad motives and even the daughter knows about it yet he promises him cultivation pills, techniques and his protection when he gains higher levels for him not to contact his daughter again.This is super retarded. I am so angry at myself for reading garbage. Absolute TRASH.
I should be given an award for completing this book and it's sequel, martial universe???? But now I'll take a break for a few years to cultivate my interest to finish the trilogy. Ummm...... Yeah
Just BORING.. The story doesn't get anywhere and there is no character depth or development. All that's happening is MC showing off infront of his daughters without adding anything to the story progression.
Amazing story, good humour, great action and a lot of faceslapping moments. The perfect formula for a cultivation novel. Highly recommend it
honestly i love this novel novels these days look too much into making sense but this is just too funny that i actually love it i wish this gets picked just because it's too funny it's been a long time since i felt something when reading a novel