this novel has some good bases as the empire and the kingdoms and 4 divine beasts and i also liked the last chap as it gave me a new look for the storey over al it s good but the update s is not steady plz update mor quikly
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Hey guys!
Yeah the author's review...
If you are looking for a story with game elements and a lot of action, do try this book.
As the author, I will be giving it a five star review, but I'll also try to keep up with the review.
Writing quality: I aim to keep spelling and grammatical errors to minimum and you can also expect the Writing quality to improve with every chapter.
I plan to keep the school arc short while all the characters will grow as the story progresses.
The world background will also be clear and detailed.
So, please do leave a review and vote if you like the story.
Oh woah! First of all, this novel deserves 5 star. I know that english is not the author's first language, but you can already see the idea of the story forward. I like how it's written. Very nice pace! A masterpiece!
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The MC is ubsurdly obtuse. You can ignore it if you want and maybe it improves later but as of now it's a very grating read. The writing quality it also quite terrible with whole paragraphs being added that don't need to be there at all. An obvious ploy to inflate the word count. E.g. "Either he could stay here for eternity, or he could jump in the strange river and try to swim for an unknown amount of time. And now, the third option was available, which was to get in the boat and let the Spector take him."This is very early on and when you read this paragraph in context you'll see that absolutely nothing is added. In a way that's almost impressive. As I said maybe it gets better later but early on (~c17) it's just a bad read. As always there's much more that can be said but most of it is negative and you get the general jist.
I absolutely love this story. I came from Scribble Hub where I started reading this when the first chapter came out, but school got in the way, and now I found it here. Glad to be back reading this gem
i friggin LOVE this novel. The author reshapes concepts familiar to us, making this novel such a fun read that lets me just muffle the world outside. I love how the characters just develop emotionally and physically. Especially the plot where a quest is introduced and when I thought it would follow the plot, the author gives a wilder better one. And LET US NOT FORGET the smexy oh so subtle tension between characters! Like, don't tell I can't scream at Cain literally flirting, Keng goin doki doki for Calis or random bromance scenes. I am dying for these scenes and i appreciate how these developements dont hinder the progression of the plot. All in all, I love Biohuman and reading it made my days. Keep up the awesome work author-sama, take care of yourself and please insert more hot scenes huehwueheuwheu
I have several things I want to highlight in this review before it gets taken down by the author, like most of my reviews that are pure and utter fact.
This novel is a carbon Walmart knockoff of the KR novel “I have infinite mana” however, due to the fact that I greatly enjoyed the Korean novel, I decided to give this a go.
I was sorely disappointed by the author this time around, and have completely dropped this garbage novel. There are many things wrong with it that simply become unbearable the more you read.
First of all, the main character is completely and utterly moronic. MC has been clearing dungeons like he’s taking a walk in the park and he’s in complete shock when he gets found out. This doesn’t track obviously, because if a official finds someone clearing dungeons easily and has only been a hunter for 2 days they are bound to investigate.
Secondly, there are a astronomical amount of errors and grammar mistakes that my brain is starting to turn into slush from the amount of garbage the author has decided to include.
My conclusion is that this story only gets a high rating because the author deletes negative reviews like this one, to maintain a high rating and trick people into reading this garbage trash heap.
Don’t read this garbage if you value your own intelligence.
Theres no story, just power fantasy tuned down, but in the end its still power fantasy, its ungodly boring, the same thing we've all seen, with no interesting concepts, terrible translation, and the only good point is the grammar but im pretty sure Google is still updating Google Translate these days, so its no different from the MTL version.
As someone who caught up to the most recent chapter , this novel is decent . it has a great concept but its poorly executed. This is the type of novel you read when you are bored and dont think too much into what you read. Also the fight scene are below average at best.
The concept of laws were annoying. The author keeps mentioning laws but never explains what they are or how they help in battles. There are different levels of laws but its never explained why a heavenly law is better than an earthly laws. All we know is the heavenly laws are better and that’s it.
The avatar art is never truly explained . All i know is that he makes avatars and the benefits are increased qi reserves, improved comprehension speed and the all share the same mind, so they are share the same techniques. But whats confusing is how they are made and why can’t high level Martial artist tell that the person they are talking to is an avatar. Also when the avatars cultivates their bodies, is the same benefits shared with the rest of the avatars or with just the main body.
Like i said great concept , terrible execution . READ ONLY IF YOU ARE BORED.
Soul Keeper had true potential. Soul Keeper was original, and well written. An excellent addition to the genre. Soul Keeper had standard tropes delivered with a smooth writing style. This was a smooth flowing story with lots of action and very likeable characters. I would recommend Soul Keeper to any fan of the genre.
The characters were so real and memorable that they could step outside the pages and be in the room with you. I cared what happened to them as if they were my own friends and family.
Soul Keeper kept me spell bound, and I was compelled to keep reading. Each scene flowed smoothly from one to the next.
The world-building was superb and each scene was easy to visualize based on the character's senses and mood. Action scenes were vividly presented and easy to follow.
I am blown away by the author’s ability to write such engaging, real-life, entertaining, phenomenal scenes. The writing style was consistent and used precise words so that exposition didn't slow the pace. There were no typographical and grammar errors that I remember.