Interesting story that I ever read it. The story is good and cool. Keep writing. Fighting! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Already read this one on another site so i am 100% sure this is another failure novel of newbie author........ well at least first 200 chapters are readable but after that even the cheat (about attribute picking) become unnessary and it main focus is about like low quality lottery system novel.....
At first i was really interested in the book, so I went ahead to read MTL. I regret doing that, apparently the author really likes lolis to a very concerning “i should call the police” degree. The MC is surrounded by girls some of which are around 8 years old, he was even naked in the bathroom with one of them, there has been weird sexual suggestions about the girls and him, heck he even gets a lolicon title from the System that endears to young girls (the dark world Arc chap. 362 -397)
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The translation is decent. The world building is like every other novel. My main problem is that the story development is way too fast. In 2 chapters, everyone went from hating him to giving him stares of acceptance. He also gains powers so fast.
I love it, nice book its well written and characters are well introduced and described. I love the fact that it starts off with a lil bit of action. Would recommend anyone to read this, grammar on point and story pace is good. Good job Author.
The few errors noted were a slight hindrance to the reading fun but the story is great. Check out The Christmas Darling!
Dropped at chapter 1 reasons
1 first chapter has alot of text but 0 content,
2 trying to make mc be known as cold heartless due to not answering questions likelyhood of mc then fucking everyone that moves elwhen he does back high
3 in this situation you are meant to have mc be betrayed by employer to give reason as to why he wants to go back in time, to destroy them
I think this novel is very interesting. Including the design of characters, languages and interesting plotlines Anyone who likes Eastern Fantasi must read this story.
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.