Bullshit.. what's wrong staying home all day long and doing your dream job also playing games and reading webnovel?
who need 3D when you have 2D one
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By the way this Novel like Jap one similar in many part. by the way this is pic of my Waifu
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changed my mind about this novel. the mc is not only a complete moron but is a bitch to a guy he know for only a day. the guy is the typical hero complex weakling and the mc is the one that have to wipe his ass from the troubles he can resolve. it's really frustrating to read and destroyed all my good feeling of the novel until he become friend w/o the someone even more dumb than him and much more weaker .
system ✓fat friend ✓once orphan, now has a family ✓the will to 'save' people ✓the book is good but god bless my soul the peanut gallery is infuriating and annoying
A very early review and my first so apologies if the review is not helpful.The story has alot of potential i have not seen a concept making players gods who interact and fight each other yet making it original and scratching a ich i never knew i had. The writing quality is good and normally we get a chapter a day or the equivalent of though the background seems similar to The Kings Avatar its nice to have a fresh take of a former kiked out pro going into a new game.The main character appears to be smart and powerful and is the first level 3 player in within his subrace making him very powerful amongst his peers this is fine however novels with just a overpowered main character beating everyone from my experience gets boring quickly. introducing rivels who can fight with him on similar levels would be nice like in The Kings Avatar.Warning beneath has major spoilers for The Kings Avatar which is used as a example to make a point.No matter how good Ye Xiu is in The Kings Avatar he cannot easily face guilds alone and his team does have their own setbacks with losses and with pro players the very top of the game can still fight him on similar levels and every victory is hard fought and we even see his slight decline due to age as his physical body cannot keep up with the hand speed of his youth as at the end his hands carnt even hold up the trophy due to the exhaustion from playing flat out.The novel is excellent and please continue writing as i cannot get enough of this novel just a slight warning that powerful characters are fine and a ex pro playing a game should have a edge but he needs a rival who can make him take some sort of loss this could come from other races gods in the novel or even other subraces gods making him lose followers or a few stats. It is just a friendly reminder that overpowered characters who always win lower the tension in a novel just look at the books for Game of Thrones people are always afraid of the next people to die. Also i dont want another novel especially one as good as this in its early stages to suffer from decline due to this. Of course the game in the novel is currently in Beta and i dont know if a reset will happen once the beta test is finished or if they will just keep the game rolling and i am excited to read more.please continue writing this great novel it has great potential.
I would like that the author could post more chapters.I think that the characters are realy interesting, special the mc.This history is also very good and i will wait for the author to post more chapter
It is a good story with some cliche parts, like every fantasy story, but it feels like there are many unnecessary parts and some conversations that are forced or unnecessary or dragged out.Overall I like the story and the slow development, but the conversations between characters doesn't feel smooth for me (don´t know how to describe it), but I will stick around and see how it turns out!Good luck!
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I dont even have to read it but the author always gives what I want and what I don't even know I want. I have no idea how you have so many books still ongoing at the same time but ever since I read the first one from you I've been hooked. I hope you keep at it and I'll keep paying. wish you well and God's speed on releasing chapters!!
Haha nice novel , antihero mc and also overpowered and also can steal abilities ........that all I want in any novel gonna read it ....
I really hate Chinese writers who don't give their mc unique abilities now it is in this novel so I am reading it.
Well story is quite good I personally like the writing style of MLB which simple and fluent not like some writers who use uncommon english words.
When a book starts by saying the MC is hated by 'ALL' guys, what's makes me as a guy invest my time in reading about him.
It's clear is the type of MC who believes all men are useless and evil and only girl's have what it takes to walk besides him.
So I guess am not worthy of reading this.
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