So far, the novel is interesting. It has been reading more, wanting to know what the system wants from Wolfram.................................................
so far what you have written is pretty solid for a fan fic. keep up the good writting and please dont try to inject the MC into the main story of the anime, alot of fan fics try that and it ruins the story. something like a while that is happening the mc is doing something major to the side is always good.
broo this is just godly, really amazing man, I hope you don't drop this!!!! Though I do hope that Lu Chen ends up with meixiu!! I just really like her.
There are some cliche elements with the arrogant young master right at the beginning but it didn't make it less enjoyable to read. The cultivation system isn't anything new so far but mc cheat is pretty fun and mostly focused on accumulation and learning instead of instant power-ups. I recommend it to people looking for some light reading.
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A bizarre mix of White Wolf style magical realism, dimension-hopping fantasy, and cultivation novel that somehow works because of the lively prose and lovable characters. I'm not big into Xianxia stuff but this story has more than enough on offer to appeal to people outside that genre's usual readership.
The main conceit of the novel is that the MC, a reincarnated or transmigrated man, offers analysis and advice to the disguised king of the country without knowing the king’s identity. In the 30 chapters so far, he’s also impressed three of the king’s ministers with his wisdom and ability to reach accurate conclusions given the scarcest of indirect evidence.
It is unclear whether he actually has such Holmesian deductive skills, or if he constructs post hoc cover stories for the knowledge he already has of the kingdom’s development. It’s not clear why he has this knowledge of the kingdom’s development either, or how comprehensive in scope and timeline his knowledge is.
Then there’s the fact that according to the synopsis he has a system, which we have yet to see. In summary, at this point the novel has been a pleasure to read, but if it continues in the same vein of him giving sagacious analyses to the king and his ministers, it will get stale.
However, as indicated above, there’s still a lot of room for further developments and significant changes to the plot, so it is almost certainly the case that the trial chapters cannot be used to judge the rest of the novel.
This is a re-review and one with some honesty.
First of all the story turned into something else than I intended, and it was actually worse in some parts than my first. I made the mc edgy for the sake of him being edgy.
Elior is almost a character without flaws but I made him somewhat a hypocrite intentionally.
The worldbuilding was dull, and honestly, I have saved up a few things for later parts. which turned out to be a bad decision.
The writing quality is poor, and you will expect a lot of typos. If you don't fear it then feel free to continue.
As for the story development and plot, it is above average with a few nice fight scenes, here and there. and the main idea of the book is pretty good.
Like my other book, this one got its voice in the chapter 70s. Honestly, I still think the book is better than many on this site with all those flaws. Continue if you like and leave behind comments.
So far from what I've read it's seems to be a really good story and I feel it could go far. Keep up the great work and sending out chapters. Love you man
Okay, I'm all caught up (So far Till Chapter 19), and I have to say, it's been an interesting read.
The author's use of narration is unique and the characters are interesting. The beginning also gets you hooked.
The line between good and evil is blurred, and I somehow find myself wondering what will happen next.
This isn't five stars since the author doesn't upload on a daily basis. I hope that changes.
Still, though, good job!