A Chance To Become An Adonis

I read this and all I can say is the MC isnt developed. He is supposed to be a grown man that was killed by his lover and got a second chance. but instead he acts like a kid, and not some *****. He seems more like a pre****. no hint of maturity. And theres no proper planning of what to do [ he has his goals of wanting to protect family, thats there ] but the actual execution isnt. this should be explored.  He hasnt made any plans on that and rather focuses on his school life.

And the MC is a mental retard or atleast denser than a neutron star. 8 yrs of marriage, wife never slept with him and he never got the hint that she didnt even like him, even in his death he said I though u loved me, didnt realise she hated him after she shot him [ what happens in story- unless changed ]

And this isnt some **** thing ,,,no they are mature adults and MC dosnt have any mental illness. so he is just stupid. this cant even be passed off as disillusion of a yandere lover cause if she disliked the MC this much why the fk wouldnt u not notice? for 8 yrs? does not make sense.

suggestion.. instead of focusing on the the social life, etc focus on the MC himself and his actual planning and execution and use of future knowledge to do things and show this. the planning, execution, process, etc. And try to mature the MC. he honestly feels like some pre t.een
rather than an *****. the face slapping moments and him feeling better than kids all way younger than him makes more apparent.

I read this couple months ago here...same author?

**: that story had a pretty stupid moment where no one recognized him after he cut his hair. and it was soo exaggerated and focused on. the couple chps after the hair cut were all about the people not realizing its him or chicks getting wet over him. so forced. Hair cuts change people , definitely agree....but to this extent where the mother, father and brother dosnt realize? so stupid [ and this is why I remember this bk and am asking whether u are the same author, if u are, do avoid this moment ]
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**sigh**, i really pity those that did not know this piece of art cause this is so awesome so author - sama please continue updating

I have read till 185 on scribble hub, I like it but its too slow and I would prefer if the harem development would be fast, it is taking too long.

a lot of stupid things, for example:
after the haircut, he turned into a different person. That is, he is so stupid that he covered his face with his hair and wants to please the girl !?
He thinks only about the girl and doesn't care that she doesn't like him and she sleeps with another? He wants to take revenge but is stupid and does nothing that can help this and if you say that this is not so, then more than 100 chapters have passed, he did not even kill his lover wife, that is, he could hire a hitman even if he could not kill himself

Author please make some character growth for Lu Chen. I mean he is letting himself spitted by that bitch and his lover. And that dumb fatty is getting on my nerves. I mean fatty who is a rich kid is bootlicking long Chen without any background. And till this day I don't understand what that shrew had seen in this pretending to be moon light guy. In contrast MC is rich and devoted. If this harlot had said once to him about academics,then I am sure he would have done well in studies also. Just what is the problem of this slut to treat him like garbage.

What I hate the most is the dense mc
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