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This is a good story so far so good, the author is new yet the writing quality is nice I don't have many complaints except a few things that can be worked on.
Well done and i wish you good luck.
Sir Silent Killer.Please Add the Tags, would make it possible for the novel to be found through advanced search and would allow us to use more fast passes.
For a Webnovel translation the quality of this story so far has shocked me with real story, world building, background, and character design that go past any other translation I’ve read so far
I thought it was really good until around 68, as soon as the kobold part started my interest in the story dropped I can already see him going around helping people he barely knows with nothing in return just because they'll do it for him, so the guy says that he shouldn't put them in danger, so he feels warm inside and helps them out, so they're friends forever and will likely stay that way forever.I think it would be better for him to go through the forest alone, marrying all kinds of living beings until he climbs the food chain, and if he helps someone he would have to give something in return, very good, it would also be good one time he finds a mate to the two to evolve together.(it was translated in google translate some parts may be wrong)
Very beautiful story line and I enjoyed every moment I read your story! Hope you keep up the great work! You are doing awesome! Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
chapters are a bit too short and the main character is a little bit dumb. hopefully all that extra words and descriptions at the end can be removed so each chapter coin cost isn't inflated. high potential novel so it's worth sticking around to see improvement
10/10Não sei oq dizer, história muito boa ein galera brso vaiarrocha
I like the story so far but I feel it has gotten a little slow in plot progression, but overall it is an intriguing novel. I also liked the Mushroom Forest Arc and even the new Tournament Arc. But I can't wait for Freya to go back to her revenge and slaughter some vampires.
Easily one of my favorite new novels on the site/app. Great characters and it has a very strong start that keeps you wanting more and more. The writing quality and overall theme reminds me of something that MLB would write. MC needs to conquer witches to get more power...if you know what I mean ? MC is almost like a spiritual successor of Su Yang from dual cultivation. MC also has a system but it isn't stupidly overpowered and serves as a guide for him to grow on his own. I believe the system doesn't give him power that he didn't have..but unlocks the potential that was already there. So he won't be able to fight end game characters or monsters right off the bat.
It's quite good. Just the kind of MC I want, an actual human being, that's not too mature or immature.
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I 100% loved the story until one of the chapters said that Mc fiancé was raped by the nobleman, and I fu*king hate ntr. This was an automatic drop for me