Can’t wait to get more chapters. It’s sad to see that it was not selected by the editor. It’s great novel, which is well written, super interesting. You won’t feel like dropping it till you read all 60. The best part about the MC is his brains and how he can scheme well, and think for the future while most MC are too emotional and fall for cliche traps set by even a random nobody who will die a few chapters later. Lastly n most importantly, it’s inspired from Otherworldly Evil Monarch which should be enough for you to pick this up.
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In the end, MC is just a slave to system. How to become strong? Add point! How to improve soul strength? Add point! Practice? No, i have a system. Comprehension of Dao? No, my system can do everything. Talent? Why the fxck i want that, i have a system. I really can't understand why this novel still have MC. Just make system tale over the world, give infinity spirit Qi out of nothing and make the world evolved.
I like this storyWell, since this only allows me to publish it if I have a certain amount of characters, then I will fill with meaningless things
Traduction must be done with google trad... It's just hard to decipher the meaning. With some efforts, and an author with brain, this novel could be enjoyable if you didn't have to read twice the same sentence to (partly) understand something.
For anyone that reads this know that this is amazing, very good pacing, great character interactions and natural development of relationships.A lot of writing techniques that can be copied, I mean learned from this
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The story is well developed and arouse one interest. it is very stimulating. I think the introduction should have been too snappy to keep the narrative flowing because some people or a person like me could eadily be discouraged if the information in the introduction part is not well articulated .
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