Well, here are my thoughts, my friends. Overall the story is quite good and gives you a pleasant experience. The Mc is not only smart but also has the strength to back it up. I can't wait to see him grow and fight a group of students of the hero academy.
I hope this story continues because have a lot of potential to go over the hundreds of chapters. Keep up the good work.
Praise to the all-mighty author
Amazing story, Cool character and wonderful system. The setting and the plot is a good deal. Also the story started with a good thriller
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I like the story it is great thank you author
I thought this would bore me to death when i first read it, but it’s not that bad i enjoyed it expecting more bro. That’s all. Review should be +140 words so im just blabbering the rest of the words. Here i go!!!!! “Bye” lel
The book is good and the story is also good. It takes a lot of hard work to write a book, I know it because I am also a writer.
You should write like this it will make it easier to read.
"Hi, are you new here," the girl asks.
"no, I have been working here for over a year now," the boy said.
It should be like this.
This novel is amazing! The author can give us a clear image of an ancient era as well as action scenes. Moreover, I'm so impressed with the ml's action scenes because they're magnificent (There are many martial artist levels for him to break through). And because the ml is so hyper, he can wipe out enemies easily which is the scene that excites me a lot.
I like reading Kingdom building novels and when this novel started I thought this was one of the best KB novels on web novel but recent chapters has been a huge let down. reading till chapter 350, the MC comes from a modern world yet has not shown any progress when handling diplomacy. I mean the way author has shown how diplomacy is handled by Riz or Rythium kingdom is very basic, even having a minister and ministry to handle external affairs they have not shown professionalism or handled things properly post war. Also why has author neglected the Spy network when crucial information about war and certain things have not been passed back to kingdom, the Inver issue was handled badly. Also the way war was won by being lucky is kinda let down. Hopefully author improves these things ( read other kingdom building novels if you have to).
It still a good novel.. keep up the good work.
Seems this book is full of mystery and secrets ? I’m in for more baby ??Added to my collection ??
The synopsis sounds familiar... Is it similar to a xianxia novel "Eternal life begin with taking a wife"???
Here is my review so far...Perfect just perfect down to the details I can't wait to see more from you and this story author-san