The story plot is awesome. There is romance mystery and everything in the story to make it perfect. Loved it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hey guys!! A typical shameless author’s review is here. First of all, I’d like to say thanks to anyone who is reading this novel and supporting me. You know, every view, review, collection, and power stone mean so much to me. They give me motivations to continue writing this story.
Alright, that’s enough for the formality.
Let’s talk about the storyline. The story is mainly about an MC going back in time to fix the past and create a new/different future for him and human race. But as the story progresses, the MC will realize and discover that there is much more to the supposed simple backstory of his regression. As for what it is or what they are, you have to read it yourself.
Now, for the story’s pace. For the reason of I want to lay as solid foundation as possible to the story, it might cause the pace of the story to be moderate at most at the beginning. Especially, the first 15 chapters of which being focused on some basic knowledge about magic, Ortus, tutorial, his future organization, his friends, and many more. That’s why, when the story progresses to tutorial ark or Ortus ark, you would not get confused with the info dump.
Last but not least, the plots of the story. I can only tell you that, I’ve already planned the main concept and some big events to half of the volume 3. It is just a plan though, it might get changed into another one if I find something better or new inspiration.
P.S: English is not my first language, so, please bear with me :D
Looks like this novel was booted off the trial list after being there for 1-2 weeks. Shame it was mediocre and it had a tree protagonist which is different and unique.
this book is pretty good, keep doing what your doing . you should go check out arkinslizes Oracle paths, y'all have kinda the same world building style.
we meet again pancakewitch... I will now enjoy myself to another of your novel. idk how but you have like 6 others books idk how. anyway back to the book... you had me at dragon and witch and I started reading.
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Everyone's leaving a gif as their review so I'mma follow the trend. Still, this book is probably one of the best one you wrote so far, kudos to you, author-san! I enjoy all of your books!
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Author, Give the a Redemption Arc, at least make Him neutral good/evil. I read too many Fics with overly Good or Evil Mc. Any ways I read more of your releases hopefully a Mass release. Good luck.
This is a very good ripoff, it is plagiarism.The original is not only better, it does not force you to pay within the first 6 chapters. This is an author who had time to not only rip-off the origenal but also had time to edit and change a few things...
This novel reads more as a slow day by day than an action adventure with slow pacing through roughly 100 chapters, the protagonist is defined as very ordinary and lacks any clear development so far, the worldbuilding is interesting but the protagonist is lacking meaningful strength, talent, wisdom or standing to make any story impact other than being fortunate. The romance is good enough though it seems his potential partners will lack in presence as they will be away for the majority of the time. Good but unfulfilling.