nice plot .... great chara.. .. . perfect world setting . .. it makes me wanna read and keep read ???? good job author . .. will always wait for the next chap ??
Droped at chapter 12. The reason is that characters are too simple and well more like dolls than humans. There are some very odd small mistakes like how can actors own clouthings get dirty when he is acting for a movie. Time is also sciwed dont get it if there was only 1 day gone or months as at one point all his cenes are done but at another point he goes home and hey mum I got that move part o.O. Abou spelling well past, present and future is a mess but spelling it self is ok.
So I dont get it how so many give 5 stars. I do think that some may like it but 5 stars is clearly overkill.
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There are too many cliches in this story. Cliches used to be something good when first used, but now they are just the same and not unique in some way. I could only force myself to read up to ch 10 and here is what I have to say.
1) The MC got some sort of bloodline power from his mother who also got kidnapped.
2) The MC's dad used to be a genius and then got crippled so both are treated like crap.
3) Of course, the MC has to get bullied because he needs trashy cannon fodder enemies for the beginning of his journey
4) The old weak useless caretaker also just happens to have a little girl that is just a year younger than the MC and she ends up being taken by someone related to the cannon fodder that the MC beat up
I think you all get my point.
However. Unique things this novel does. The little servant girl isn't some unsurpassed jade beauty. The dad gets killed off lol.
Oh yeah, I forgot about the friend that the dad had who seems to be OP, but for plot was never able to help his friend and his friend's son. What a shame.
It's so cliche it hurts
This is the first time I write a review for a novel on this website. I really like the novel but decide to drop it after the chapter MC meet with the woman character. The woman character in this novel pretty much ****ed up the whole novel development.
plot gets more and more exciting as story advances! highly recommend
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Okay I have read just the few chapters and let me say it is not dissapointing and it is actually Great. Contrary to what you would expect, it isnt one of those less detailed and very slow paced type of novels. Although it is slow paced its not "THAT" slow and you can actually feel the story progress as long as you give it time, it also contains more detail compared to the regular stories that have a fast pace which helps the story progress smoothly. So this is just my first part of review and I will change it later. See you guys again
The novel is quite good. The MC desired to cultivate is understandable.
The background characters act quite reasonably.
The MC has a very powerful artifact but he did not actively use it and stride to increase his power with his knowledge and hard work.
The subplots are surprisingly decent, some problems the MC has been resolved quite naturally and did not feel like force conflict.
60 chapters and not a hint of romance, it's a good chance of pace.
The premise of the story is depicted clearly. The world building is accordingly, as everything is explained in great detail for the reader.
Sadly, the quality of the grammar is rather poor. I believe this work has the potential to grow into more, but on the condition that the overall quality improves.
I wish you a lot of fun writing the rest of your story.
Well its an original story that hasnt been use for the qazillionth time with comedic elements and so far background is pretty nice as well may need more elaborating at later chapters but nonetheless its a unique and really good for webnovel
The writing is good, but a little cliche as it follows the much-used ‘Chosen One’ trope. The story is also a little too fast-paced. Also, I find the mother a little naive (or at the maximum a little schizophrenic).