The only thing wrong with this story is the translation got cancelled. This is easily one of the best stories I have read. It makes 99.9% of the stories on here look like hot trash.
Anybody that compares this to My house of horrors or Lord of mysteries truly has a screw loose. Plus this is so low standard I can't even. The novel also has a veryyy shallow view on female characters as we are reminded very often in fact all time, that's all what they exist for really in this novel and that's not even all of it.
Hello, as the tag beside me name suggested, I am the author of this novel. This will be the tenth review on this book. Madatory 5 stars ofcourse. If you're reading this, don't forget to check out this novel and if you have already done so, do review, comment and vote!
And if you have even done that, then thank you, you have made this nobody authors day!
Lots of love!!
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It seems likea good story, but badly translated. Despite many missing connecting words, and improper word form choices, I was interested enough to keep reading until I ran out of chapters. I suspect that practice will improve the writing quickly, because the story telling is decent in spite of the slightly broken English.
Some suspension of disbelief is required for me, since the setting feels rather game-within-a-game, but as long as I set aside the expectation that the main character lives in the same reality that I do, it seems fairly consistent so far.
It’s good, an original concept that let you breath a bit in these repetion of cliche.
I recommend it 100%.
Just pass the first 3 chapter and you will be hooked in it.
just because you are an Indian. I'll review it latter. I also tried to right one but had to drop it because of job but it is still alive offline good job
This novel is kind of meh.. Good for those who like a sect building-ish genre but definitely in far ahead... The way he interact with people and his own system kind of awkward, like you can insult someone whole family today and yet you act like BFF in next day which I don't really like. Maybe author want to convey some kind of stuff he imagine yet he can't write it down perfectly or the translator screw up.. Anyway, not recommended by me..
Traduction must be done with google trad... It's just hard to decipher the meaning.
With some efforts, and an author with brain, this novel could be enjoyable if you didn't have to read twice the same sentence to (partly) understand something.
Beautifully written, the story itself is new from what I've read. A great storyline so far and the use of words are perfectly aligned. This book has great potential, definitely worth a vote.
a very interesting story from the start. makes me not hesitate to add to my reading list. I just read three chapters, I hope that in my spare time I can continue reading. because while honing my English too hehe. always success! I'm sorry I'm using google translate. maybe there are some strange words hehe
Your synopsis could hatch curiosity in one's mind, I was intrigued by how your story would start. There were too many dialogues that did not consist of actions, but I got the gist of it. Overall, I enjoyed reading it. Keep updating~
An interesting book overall. Was worth the read.
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