The story is good, but I feel like the MC is a little wishy washy when it comes to his humanity. He is written as a psychopath and this brilliant assassin, but at times he is illogically stupid. There's also the bit about him finding humanity, losing it, and finding it again at what I thought were unnecessary times. Personally, it just kind of made the MC feel artificial, not totally bad but not great either. I liked how the world building played out. I thought that it was well done with different factions and incorporating multiple facets from an apocalyptic world. I really only have two major critiques. Firstly, there are large parts where I feel there is a step forward in plot, five steps back with long info dumps or a random background story, and then a mad rush of 10 steps forward with plot. I'm sure there's a grand design, but there were whole chapters at times that I just skipped. There were definitely some plot twists that I never saw coming though coupled with some pretty entertaining dialogues as well. My second critique is mostly grammar. By no means is it bad, but there are times when the completely wrong word is used or an occasional character name switch. Again, not the worst, it would just sometimes break my flow. The story as a whole is enjoyable. Thank you for your hard work. I was honestly surprised on how fast you could push out content.
what can i say? i have no complaints currently, and don't see any coming. it took longer then I'd like for the harem to start up, but ever since it i can see the hold on it. I'll be sticking to this one till the end.
To the author, stay safe, it would be a travesty to have this book suddenly stop.
Hello! Author here, I'm currently starting to edit the chapters beginning from that start for any typos, mis-gendering, and such. There have been many kind people to point out the mistakes so I could edit it but reading my own work from the start still revealed minor ones.
Anyway, there would be no changes to the story whatsoever from me doing this and this is just an update to tell everyone that I'm aware of the mistakes made and I 'm starting to correct them. However, if you still spot more, please do tell me and I will update them at the earliest.
Thanks for reading and see you next chapter ^_^
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Very unique and interesting reincarnation story that I hope the author takes in a good direction. Interesting even though so far it’s just a rock going around on a Hadean era-esque planet. Really hope that once the author moves in and gets their stuff set up they can update this regularly. 4/5 Definitely recommend
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hope you can update regularly, can't wait to read the next chapter. Go go go go go . . ..
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Hmm, good story you have here. I was interested at first since, you know, it's a fucking samurai novel! But try to add a little bit of Japanese culture to the main character, Claude, since I think he lived in the Edo Period of Japan. But even if I'm wrong, a samurai must still have his heritage with him. That's what makes a samurai, a samurai.
Funny, hilarious, amusing, comical, laughable, ridiculous, playful, silly, whimsical, ludicrous
Had to search up more synonyms for funny to do this review, don't let it go to waste
It seems that the author is dead from Corona. It could have been a 5 star review if he just posted a single chapter in the last 3 months. But, no chapters, no comments, no replies. No activity from author. I am sure he died.
This novel had great potential. But I can't read it any longer, too much forced interactions. Ella's interaction is too forced for me to continue this novel. Well it's ur story so all I could do is vent here. Best of luck
Firstly, please update, I want to read more.
The story, concept, writing quality, pacing, character design, character development... everything is done perfectly well.
I've always liked stories with non-human MC and this one really got me hooked.
Aurelia's cheery personality and her witty sense of humor are the highlight to this story.
The teacher/system is kinda an ass but he is a necessary evil I guess.
Lastly, I'm loving this story and I will be waiting patiently for the updates but dont take too long okay.. :P