Website : qidian china
Views : 998thousand
Rating : 8.3(488)
Chapters : 899
Status : ongoing
Word count : 2.73 million
Rank : 98
author level : lv5
You have an interesting take on storytelling but your needs to be edited further so your readers won't be distracted while reading. It's good of you to ask for feedback and I truly hope your work will get better because of those. :)
really good, mostly because of the WWI vibes with a cool combat system.
Sorry to burst your bubble girls but, isn't this a story whom a male is its protagonist? I mean, "The Empress' Gigolo"! See the apostrophe? Further more, the 'gigolo' word?! It means, a male escort or social companion who is supported by a woman in a continuing relationship; often living in her residence or having to be present at her beck and call----(wikipedia). So, just because the cover is a female doesn't mean she's the protagonist... sigh I want it to be a girl mc too
First the concept of the story is truly a breath of fresh air, but I do not know how the story has such an overall good rating. Yes, it's decent,but the writing quality is poor at best. There are a lot of gaps in the wording that just plain don't make sense. It also is obvious that the author isn't native English speaker because the translation is shoddy. Don't trust all the reviews they're just heeping praise with no criticism to help the author fix the mistakes which shows they're probably mostly paid reviews. Some may not but I'm not multilingual so I don't understand most of the reviews.
I usually love reading novels about games but not this one. I dont know how you can immerse yourself in a game like pubg. It would have been better if the author made the game a fps vrmmo version.
Just wish this story would update more.
This is really nice and it is very explanatory this might be what I need to start writing.I believe this is the right for beginners to get started
The fact that you can make a fight so exhilarating is amazing and the plot line is pretty good as well. I also love how you made the character have good potential but has flaws like a normal human being.
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Ok so I’ve been caught up on 2 other of authors books and honestly this is my favorite one. You’ve progressed do much as a writer and the characters feel way more real here rather than wish fulfillment fillers. If everyone can match the main wife and be developed this could be very popular.
Take this as more as a slice of life with a deeper main plot.
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