honestly better then what I expected from the premise of the story. keep up the good work.
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Wow!! What a twist..Definitely didn't see that coming. But who exactly is that guy living on Titan, and why is Katy in love with him?? Please upload faster.....I'm really enjoying this new direction.
Bad,no chapter in month, and pretty much copying another novel I know.
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Hey Author, before i get invested in this story, comming back and do you plan on seeing it all the way through? Id hate for this story to be amazing and stop before it even gets started.
The MC is stupid, illogical, and arrogant
-destroys half the kingdom because the guards wont let him enter.
-Says he wants to get stronger quickly and wants a powerful skill. Gets two random powerful skill but says he'll save it for later(illogical since he's incredibly weak and the skills are random, should've just recieved them and train(though his luck and plot armor might give him what he needs so not
really illogical I guess)).
The King is stupid and illogical
-MC destroys half his kingdom but he's the one apologising and compensating the MC, feels like the MC can ràpe his daughter and he will even reward the MC for it(though might be considered smart but he acted too cowardly)
-Gets angry later when the MC talks arrogantly with him(even though he always do and had no problems).
-Gets shocked when MC defeated a level 300 Royal guard even though he knew the MC one shotted a level 500 dragon a day ago.
Review as of chapter 93, no spoilers
First of all, I can't tell anything about the updating stability yet, as I binged all 93 chapters.
Its a new novel, with some admittedly cliche tropes, but so far it's interesting with an intriguing plot/mc
This novel is clearly written by AI, namely chatgpt. I didn't know that webnovel allows such tricks.You shouldn't be an AI specialist to see this.
Hello all authors. Please stop writing children protagonists into stories clearly designed for adult leads (or at the very least somewhat adult-late teens). Anime and japanese light novels influenced and ruined an entire generation of what could have been amazing writers. At no point does it make sense in this novel, nor in 99% of other CP novels. Ruins the entire reading expericence and decimates any form of immersion.
Why do I feel that it's written in some different language and then translated to English? Practically everything which was named in the previous chapters got called in next one's differently than before, even stats in status...
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