It was a compelling and fun read. The many instances/ situations the main character finds himself in make you feel for the guy. I couldnt help but be drawn in.
Great work! I enjoyed reading Ryo's backstory. It reminded me of a movie I've watched called "A Silent Voice" where the main character also bullies a new student and regrets it later on. I look forward to seeing how Ryo will (or will not) learn from his mistakes during the Aries mission with Sez.
Some suggestions for the intro:
- You could specify what exactly makes the alien species significantly better than humans. From what I've read, my understanding was because they want to do their best in everything and that they treasure their results, but don't humans do the same as well? Humans are capable of having a passionate mindset but make mistakes. Maybe you can add more explanation as to how aliens never make mistakes.
- You could remove the part about how they changed the currency (how the nickel is now a penny, a dime is a nickel, etc). I thought it was confusing and unnecessary
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== Chapter four review, may be changed at the future===
First for all. Everytime I looked at the female lead book. It will always be like
ROMANCE
CEO
WEREFOLF
VAMPIRE
MAFIA
bleh! that's too mainstream!
but Zehel had proved that she could mix Mafia with the genre that the male lead liked most, Reincarnation.
Writing style aside, not going to lie. It's like having Iphone 12 quality with Xiaomi's price! I liked that a lot.
at the end. I can say, this novel is deserved a lot more attention!
While I sadly skippety skippety skipped all the steamy stuff, the non-steamy parts showcased that the author knows what they are doing. Excellent style. I would legit say that the horrifyingly striking beginning is one of the best I have read in a while. There is nothing I would change about the language, even though the genre is not my thing. I would say that the pacing and the absolute gut punch of a beginning should be enough to convince any reader.
Currently caught up to the latest chapter and I absolutely love the series so far, can't wait to see future chapters and how the tournament ends!!
Amy ? ???A nice novel. Read read read read read read read…Up to 140 chapters the MC is still a V lolololololEnjoy at your ownself :) GGWP
If you don't like MC being forcefully enslaved and tortured by the heroine candidate then this novel isn't for you.I rate it 5 because although I hate Celine as much as I hated Mineta, Malty and Rachel, the novel deserves attention.
It very much impressive and it very understandable and it a mind blowing story well the story is fantastic and it reliable ,I would love to be a writer just like him to write my own story so people can also read my storyVery much impressive keep up the good wor