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Kinda boring not gonna lie... the translation quality is also kinda bad... like... you can read it... but it feels kinda forced. The book is also boring as all hell... ive read like 20 chapters and all he was doing is like opening lootboxes and that is the content for that chapter... rly boring.
Maybe it's just that I'm a bit nostalgic... but I remember reading this a few years ago and thought it was really good.As the MMORPG genre has been overused/beaten to the ground on the majority of them, this one breaths something akin of fresh air for me.As I stated, I am a bit bias as I just want to continue and finish it mostly for the nostalgia that it provides me.Story so far is decent no major threshold to speak of, the MC is likeable a bit gutless in day to day events has some mood/attitude changes when he goes "online".Characters are minor in the story as no major progression has been done to them, but in most novels you won't see much in the duration of 60 chapters.World so far is unknown for the most part as it leaves us with the basic knowledge you'd see in futuristic novels per se, the majority of the action is in the virtual world which likewise isn't really that well outline but hopefully if it's pick we'll have more info-dump on it.
Look like it's a story trying to appeal to op likink people but fail everywhere else, the world story and character are bland and cliché, the only decent part is the idea of the ring and what it do, yet the application is terrible, there no world building either and everything is laid out openly so much you know what the Mc will do before he will.Quite sad to see the ring concept butchered by this author
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I was hopeful for this novel I thought awesome he is going to use his knowledge of 20+ years to become stronger faster than anyone and master the dao. But no its clunky the plot if for lack of a better word stupid and boring. The overall plot outline is good but the execution is terrible. He comes off like an idiot in the first chapter when you learn he is eating a chicken he stole he see a girl rather than acting like a normal 20+ year old person and asking would you like some. He tells her (knowing almost nothing about this world mind you) to **** off. Then later talks about his maturity and knowledge WHAT. Then the author spends 15 odd chapters fucking around till something interesting happens and you think okay now hes going to become powerful and fight for his family or something nope nothing. He back his character into a corner saying if anyone see him do something amazing they will think he is posses or crazy. WTF. Very boring and disappointing.
Poor translation.Some like a mt translate.Some like a copy-paste from google.Sometimes Translator just wanna change name like he dont care.Use wrong gender so much. You use "he or his" with a girl in many paragraph. And use "senpai" in Chinese novel, really!?! Poor translation the name of skill. I dont know what the hex with that (Bālī s̄ạns̄kvt) skills.The story is good and MC have a god system support him. But I tried every time I read this novel bcoz bad translation quality.
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Came from legion, loved the beginning of the book Looking forward to more Will update rating when the updates become little more frequent Keep up the good work Biako
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