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As soon as the person climbed to the rooftop, he searched left and right: "No signs of him here. Over."
Her face turned grave. "This won't do," she stated. Gev raised his eyebrow at her. "If the police won't help us then we must be the one who will act, right here and right now."
So I do really enjoy the story, its good and its fun to read and I plan to read all of it but there is a big con that people should know before going in. Its inconsistent, things in the story change a lot, many things become not canon anymore or changed, it could really use a big edit to fix it. So enjoy but don't take anything too seriously like the backstory or how things work in the game.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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well now....the cliches keep comin right after another.. the beginning seemed a little promising with the brothers situations juxtaposed and all.. then it felt like it turned into just the author's self fantasy
Great start up untill you hit Chapter 98 and then it becomes broken and unreadable, like the author left out a bunch of stuff between chapters
Ahh finally I can go on with the story that cultivation system with all those realms and what they do and all the details was a bitch to create from scratch.Seems my creativity is not up to par took me almost a month to create everything but I'm personally satisfied with how it went.Would have been full 5 stars but I'm not going to lie I can promise everything else but the updating stability.
I can relate to the protagonist's life ? I want to live like her though it's not easy to accept the fact that all you have is a lie ? Good work, Ms. Author! You got me hooked and although I haven't finish reading all the chapters, I just want to share my thoughts ? Looking forward to finish reading the book ?
dude got 100+ int and 200+ Wis as basic stat and he chose[[ Archer]] among all the basic classes..idc how much you gonna validate, it at the of the the day it's not magic but just a sharp pointy stick
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
