This book is supremely well written. For someone who has trouble writing action scenes, your book is much better then many books on this platform. Many things like grammar and spelling are done very well. One thing would be some logic holes, but they are very small, and don't affect the story. I really hope that you are able to continue updating and adding new chapters, as the first 20 are really great.
I am early on in this book and I am really enjoying it so far! The world design is really interesting and characters Are enjoyable. I am looking forward to seeing how the story progresses!
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It’s one of these novels again. I dropped it early on so my review might seem redundant, but... Qidian... please do not pick up this novel.
It’s a repeat of all the other novels that share these tropes and cliches with nothing akin to unique. Although I did enjoy some parts, that was merely because it was copy paste rhetorical comedy concepts that would make anyone laugh. It’s also a shame the title is a bit misleading as I was expecting something similar to Lin Ran, but as far as I read there seemed to be only one plot device: fighting notorious thugs and villains to save beautiful women.
The story has regressed in terms of quality over 20 chapters (I mean seriously, how is this possible) and the beginning was saturated to begin with.
This novel is as if Genius Daddy in the City and The Mightiest Little Peasant had a baby.
This book preview was so great. It honestly still makes me sad that it wasn’t picked and its been 7 months. Like damn I can’t remember yesterday’s breakfast but I still miss this book.
I like this novel more than the "beginning after the end " for the sole fact that the mc is not totally powerless when crisis strikes the overall quality is good but it would be even better if there was more romance involved
An editing would be appreciated, I can’t understand how you can post a story with so many grammar faults.
Even I who is from a country where English is difficult to learn wouldn’t make that many mistakes.
The story is good, the world background excellent, the characters could be better written but still acceptable, the story is finished so no need to wait for update.
Other than grammar, the story is a gem that would probably have a deep success if it was readable.
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For the love of god I’ll take this. Y’all mught complain about copy & paste cultivation novels but I quite enjoy them SO IF YOU COULD PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF F#^\\^\\*]* GOD NOT COMPLETELY DESTROY THIS FOR ME. YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO GET A REGULAR CULTIVATION NOVEL ON HERE NOW????
It's quite an interesting fantasy book. I think you've got lots of ideas to keep the story flowing. The character names are also unique. I can't wait to read more chapters~
It’s very hard to read since the translations are bad but the story and characters are very good so I don’t mind the translations that much but I hope it gets better.