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Woah!!! Love this already. I was bored and was looking for a new novel to read. When I found this quickly started to read because this got me. I just finished reading SVSSS for the 8th time. When I saw your work, started to read this. Author, love u so much.This is soo good.Please upload more..Keep going.Waiting for more...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]❤❤❤
I welcome all opinions of my readers, you are free to point out the irregularities existing in my novel with a civilized approach.
I trust the story's successful building would depend on your views about it.
Enjoy your time reading everyone.
it's a good story, even if no one does, keep writing. I'll be waiting for new one's.
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It goes to a good place this book that I can see without forcing my eyes. I believe with time and more chapters. It would better and more fleshed out.
The story is about the average day to day life of a school boy, with magical powers.
There was some sad undertones that involved death and longing. I did enjoy the magical aspect of the story.
Overall the story was well written, the author showed the importance of family especially when facing tough situations.
A great read, I decided to ask the author if I could read the story because of the conversation I heard on discord about the BL undertones, maybe its just me but the story did not feel that way, maybe down the road that could happen. My take on the story is the fantasy/magical aspect and the power of family was what captured my attention about the story.
Man this story is the hella fun to read it especially since this is a alternate Philippines now that's a plsusin my eyes lol check it out and read it lol
great novel overall, really excellent at developing the various characters. If I have a gripe it's that it is to slow which is inherently a bad thing but I'm skirting the line between interested and bored. With the constant slow pace I can't bring myself to use anymore points on unlocking chapters. I don't mind it being slow for a few chapters but a lot of the stuff covered in the slow chapters has been covered repeatedly. I'm often paying to read the same content just in a new setting ie now instead of him thinking about it while sitting on a horse he is explaining it to someone.. which makes sense logically but for a reader it's redundant information. Not saying that it needs more action just needs more things than it's currently giving me.
Marvellous! Axeemah the golden pen is back again with another yet captivating novel. But this time it's kinda ancient and I absolutely love it! I love the pace, the background development and characters. They are so real!I have to give this book a solid 5 stars!
Well like others I wanted to like this story but it was just so hollow. Things just happen and there is no development of anykind. Honestly this feels more like a draft then a propper story.
I really like student learning systems and this really hit the spot, good novel.
Hey guys please rate this story honestly! I enjoy feed back and take all feed back into consideration. I am the author of this book and love suggestions and ideas for my story!