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So yeah, I voted for this novel and have read up to 18 chapters. I had a high expectation, and from what I've read, it's too high, but it's not bad.
This internet Cafe thing, I was expecting a literal internet Cafe, like both game, but also the Cafe part. As of now, all we're getting is the same Resident Evil gameplay, it's so repeated and boring.
It could really improve, since I'm writing this at night, let me just summarize everything that need to improve/can be different.
Characters: Pretty bland, they're either not rich, rich, or kinda rich. There's girls and boys, but the only way to differentiate them is that one is pretty and screams a lot, the other is rich and screams less. The Mc is bland as well, there's nothing to his character at all.
World Building: I remember how many people said that this is similar to gourmet of another world and I don't see it. Gourmet of another world had a pretty good and solid world building, this novel (and I mean Gourmet of another world from chapter 1 to chapter 18, comparing it to this novel from chapter 1 to 18) is so boring. All we know is that there's a school. A few shops that aren't very popular. We know the country's name and the capital as well, and yeah... That's all.
Story development: Probably the worst that this novel does, it's just new people entering the Cafe, threathing the owner, gets tricked to play, says "if I don't like it, I get a refund", screams, starts loving the game, comes back for more, basically throwing their money at the Mc.
That isn't plot. It's just a few isekai CNs into one gameplay novel. But that's just a theory, a Resident Evil theory. Thanks for reading.
This this is gold mc is a god.nuff said just read it . **. Not for people who hate op stuff this novel is just a joke not in the bad way . i know my review suck but just read this novel if u wanna past time.
would love to read this..........I love novel with this kind of genre.it's awesome .
one of my favourite novels!!!!
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This novel is complete mess.
I got the impression that the author still has no idea what to write about. Most of the text looks like gibberish. The author has thrown a lot of very vague ideas into one pile and is constantly jumping from one idea to another. Moreover, the description of what is happening is so blurry that it looks like a complete absurdity: legacy, war, puppet emperor, creator, etc. - some kind of set of incoherent words and out of nowhere appeared characters that exist in a far away. The author also jumps in time into the future, then into the past. The cultivation system has only the names of the levels and nothing else.
The author also constantly says that the main character did not control his actions and his mind was unstable, although there was nothing like that at all. In every second sentence, the word "system" is repeated: "he felt it in his system," "it infiltrated his system," etc. What's wrong with the author's (or translator's) system?
Main conflict of novel: multiple personality disorder of MC.
Seriously. Is this the plot of a fantasy novel? Of course, there is a huge amount of water and fillers in the novel. In general, reading this novel is a waste of time.
I've read a decent amount of the raws. The MC is a complete badass fighting maniac who doesn't give a **** about anything other than whopping ass and taking names. No stupid romance distractions, some political intrigue and territory building here and there, but the main focus is always on the MC and him stomping his opponents into the ground. VOTE FOR IT!!!
very difficult to read. although sentences are not MLT, I don't understand what is going on.
Awesome book i like it and the characters are interesting
Love this novel. I recommend everyone else to check it out. At least try reading the first few chapters and then decided whether you want to continue or not.
Great mc has a very real personality that shines. Also, so far the world building has been well flushed out and very creative can’t wait for more
I gave it a chance. Read ten chapters, found myself skimming through it by the end. The prose needs a lot of work, the scenes have no suspense and the overall story just doesn't have anything that warrents my continued interest. This kid is already 18 and still a nobody. If it was intentional, then that just means the author has no foresight. LEGENDS are the best, and they show it early on. Messi being a prime example. Him STARTING at 18 already makes him far worse then his competitors it terms of future fame. I'm disappointed with it, but it seems like a trend with sport novels. Every author botches the beginning.