The book has great potential. Good use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole. And as a reader you will get the chance to see author's idea and how he placed them to make a story.
I went out of my way to write a full review for this story, because I felt like it had a lot of potential, decent plot idea, and the author can improve significantly.Writing Quality is a bit disappointing. "Show, don't tell" is a cornerstone of writing. There are lots of explanations for everything with info dumps, instead of a slow but steady discovery. Various descriptions are awkward many times as well. In addition, there are a number of typos. I honestly just expect more from a premium novel.Author updates regularly, which is great.Story development feels pretty basic. Nothing groundbreaking or new. There's a system. Someone has transmigrated. Theres a tournament arc. Etc. It doesn't pull me in because I feel like I've seen it all before. For a world that is being invaded, it doesn't feel like it at all. Everyone seems too casual about it all. Normal people just living their lives casually when the world is falling apart around them. We had a global pandemic where people were dying from covid, and things changed everywhere. I can't imagine monsters invading, and people just acting like martial arts are just "sports" anymore. You give little to no impression about how society has changed from this.Character design is a little boring. I wish that there was a little more character development. Everyone other than the MC feels a bit two dimensional. Even the MC sometimes feels a bit boring. I don't know how you plan to bring character growth to the MC either since he was already an adult, and he is doing the same thing he was doing in his previous life. There needs to be personal growth for the characters, otherwise you result in a Xianxia novel where everyone is rigid and unreasonable.World background also got 3 stars because there is nothing new about a world being invaded by monsters.
Interesting novel, butchered by translator. The MC (in the raws) is called Sun Jin and he isn't former navy SEAL, and he has nothing to do with FBI. It even has nothing to do with USA, all the names are Chinese.
It’s basically 'The Charm of Soul Pets', but without a story. The pets were switched for the nearest thing (moon fox -> moon wolf), the hardwork for a system and everything in general is worse : the translation, the stakes, the world building, the size, etc…To give you an example, in TCoSP, the MC will die if he doesn’t get strong enough. In this story: no university… That’s not exactly on the same level. You can apply this comparison to everything in general.Now, I give it a fairly bad review, but it is still redeable. I’d rather recommend you 'The Charm of Soul Pets', 'Astral Pet Store' or 'Museum of Deadly Beasts' over this, but if you’ve already read them and aren’t into rereading stories like me you can go for it. It’s more of a low priority read than a no-read. Imma continue but I probably won’t finish it.
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mc is a vagabond, who due to his unique eyes, very skilled with firearms, or long distance in general. he will do anything as long as it is "legal" or that makes him stronger, but he has no fixed purpose (as far as I read) besides being literally moved by cool things, money, weapons and etc ... to the rest he is a disinterested person who thinks it is better to spend his time sleeping.its level of power is simple, and except for the names, without much difference, but it is still effective and worked, to a certain extent.apart from the MC and this jacket, the author does not focus on any other characters so it seems that they are just stereotypes made to make the story move, because if it depends solely on the MC it would be a chapter of development and 10 of filling.apart from the unique personality of the mc and his faithful companion mister Jacket another notable thing is the mc system. the system has no explanation of what it is, and why choose mc, after all he literally dreamed of a ball of light and BAM! He's a cheater. Of course, this is compensated by its unique way of strengthening the MC. in addition to the good old store of appealing items, it also has a casino (detail: mc is lucky-0), its power is also interesting, as it is in the title the mc is strengthened through titles and stories. In other words, when the MC kills a strong monster or does something for the first time, he will earn a story that compensates him with a bonus, going from a bonus in strength to bargaining with a merchant, the titles are self-explanatory.conclusion:Positives: mc charismatico, interesting features, good story rhythm.Negative points: secondary characters without personality and little involvement, poor background story (the first chapter appears only that he is a vagabond and that he had a crazy dream), rustico beginning has no explanation about what the MC did before the story started and a lot less about his family and friends, both family and friends had few information paragraphs, little world, little information about the empire and the history of important cities and shops.anyway it is a good read, although it is not a masterpiece, and I recommend that you read at least until the paid chapters before thinking about dropping it or not
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Truly a fun one! Hero being a playboy and reincarnated as a monkey was a great idea! Writing quality is definitely good. Looking forward for more fun! Keep them coming
Raw
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I had hope, but that hope got dashed pretty quickly.
Very disappointing.
Well, time to find another novel,
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Very interesting story, from the title I thought it was going to be like some of the other "Teaser" Novels that have been released these few weeks. The title made me expect it to be something that caused the MC to become very OP quickly but to my surprise while it does have that aspect it isn't so quick to make the character strong. This story seems like it has a lot of potential unlike others which break the story (by making the MC OP) so much that their is very little plot or story so that the book ends quickly. I hope this story gets picked and it continues down the route and doesn't stray off and become something cliché.
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