Mad Genius Conquering the Heavens

The only thing I noticed is the whole shoving three different dialogue into one paragragh. You always start a new paragraph when starting a new dialogue.

This is a great novel for readers who love unique stories on an epic scale, filled with power and all things sci-fi! Recommended!
/Dimisaurus

It's quite an interesting fantasy book. I think you've got lots of ideas to keep the story flowing. The character names are also unique. I can't wait to read more chapters~

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