Starsign Lord

Will give it 5 stars but...it needs a lot of work, it doesn't give me the feeling that I'm reading a novel. I'm still in the process of reading it and the chapters are very short but there is something about this writing that I can't put my finger on that just makes it seem...incomplete.

Maybe someone with better critiquing abilities will be able to spot it but this novel just doesn't feel like a novel, it's somewhere between that and a journal.

I plan on continuing to read it for now but these are my thoughts. I recommend readers check it out for themselves.

Good luck, author, I don't like leaving bad reviews since I think everyone should give a novel a try before they bash it and especially for new novels, leaving a poor review (star wise), can be detrimental

Thanks to the all readers. reading my book and sending power stones to me to upgrade the book even further. Thank you all.

It means a lot to me

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This is pretty much enjoyable  i have a great time reading it .

It goes to a good place this book that I can see without forcing my eyes. I believe with time and more chapters. It would better and more fleshed out.

Great book on chapter 28 love it already giving me naruto vibes kinda would love extra chapters other than that this a very good book recommend for everyone.