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The quality of the book is superb. Even from the chapter names, I could feel the maturity of the writer and I just couldn't believe how detailed and understanding everything turned out to be. If you're looking for a book to get lost in, this is it.
16chapters but the MC is still trash with no cultivation . he can make pills that is useful why not use them ? bad. hmmm. so bad. . you should have made the MC cultivation around chapters 5+.. NO cultivation = improvement. you are just wasting chapters to make filler or trash story
need more chapter my friend
this masterpiece really have more imagination and fetish than i am
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Thank you everyone who read this webnovel of mine. It was my first attempt at a short story. When I started, I wanted to produce a story that was nine chapters long and with every second chapter focused on one of the support characters. Also, I wanted to keep it between fifteen thousand and twenty thousand words so as it could be read in one day and hopefully on sitting. Finally, I wanted to complete it in four days (not including days which I took off to work on other stories). I achieved all those goals so I’m happy. If you enjoyed my webnovel, please provide a review.
One of the best originals I've read so far. Readers who's into xianxia/wuxia will be in on a surprise. Love the concept, development, background and update speed. As a writer myself, I'm very impressed with how much the author can write while maintaining quality chapters. Salute to you bro!
i usually read 50 chapter before continue or drop a novel but i drop this at C41........the plot are a mess...i dont understand where the story is going,this is chinese cultivation with western setting then hes kowtowing to his parents before leaving them....i dont understand the setting anymore...he act live evil n cruel MC then act like beta simp to the girl his mother force on him cuz he wont say no to his mother...then he leave the family home bringing the girl with him...she gonna ask for food n all then hes gonna think its so annoying but still do what she ask...hes leaving the family when theres lot of people targetting him even the king...i dont know if his guards that much stronger to protect him... I really like the concept of this novel with a EVIL CANNIBAL MC wreaking havoc in the world...i never read a novel with cannibal mc before so that kinde new but NOT gonna torture myself with this one....
really looking forward to more chapters, would appreciate more/week.
Decided to be shameless and write this review since nobody bothered to drop one.
I guarantee that anybody who likes the genre would love it since I like it, wrote the plot, writing the novel, editing it and reading it and enjoying it as as a reader.
So for anybody interested in this genre, read it, drop a comment, save it, and support me(if you like too).anybody interested in the plot can see the below spoiler(although not much of one for me)
great novel also it seems the mc stole the throne of imu sama
TLDR : the story is ok with confusing or adlibbed power structures that can change on a whim. Where I stopped being interested is when the love interest expresses she’s going to cuck/NTR MC and MC doesn’t really care other than to zone out convo. The female love interest said it would be another female ….if that makes anyone feel better.The author writes situations and then jumps further in the story to back track explaining what happened. It’s not the most fun way to read. The author also leaves huge gaps for you to contemplate the meaning of what happened and what was said. It does not work the best for reading translations. I think the author just assumes you understand what jumps they are making. The females in the novel all cultivate the “ruthless method.” so they kill most emotions or can jump from relationship to relationship experiencing life to help cultivate easier. The MC love interest has a dual cultivation method. I don’t know if it’s bad translation or not, but it seems like she has to have other partners to increase her cultivation rank. In later chapters, 134, the female cultivator even says she’s going to “seek out and express her feelings to sister Sun”. The MC even hears it but doesn’t even comment on it other than asking what she means. Which she does not answer. Then the MC zoned out the rest of the convo.
Honestly speaking , this author always amazes me with good books. I'm impressed by how it captivates me at just two chapters . highly recommend this novel . Keep up the good work Author .?
