I feel like korin lork is worse.
My brother I understand your pain if you want something worth your time read the novel called a sword God in a world of magic the title is *ss but God the story is magificent its Reverend insanity but with the POV of a normal man becoming him
The author has the most sh*tty lines of any kind, in my opinion. It is also worth noting that he simply cannot give normal motivation, only a return to family.
Not to mention getting into sh*tty situations where you can just ignore and develop.
I quit this cr*p because at ~260 it again has problems with the base that the author created to add f*ck*ng drama. He will also solve them with some kind of artifact from the bushes.
It did
true ...its not writers fault bcoz they are taught too much comunism .....haiz
He’s a feet man
This claasic stuff turns to shit when elves n orcs are introduced
I don't know what is wrong but there is a gap between chapter 25-194. What should I ?
If you enjoy novel like Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, then you definitely going to like this one, since the author itself is a fan of ORV, and the novel contains references for the novel and other novels too. The only thing I hope the author could improve in the next chapters and even edit the previous one, is the writing quality, since it has some grammar errors.
With best regards,
vorlefan.
Wonderful novel: definitely my new top original. I love the steampunk ideas and themes. I am glad you did not drop it after the contest: keep writing pls.
I like the OP MC and his goals. His abilities are srsly ridiculous. The factions in the wotld are messed up: like nearly everyone is cruel. But its the apocalypse so I guess thats ok.
Mc seems to hold up ok after going through terrible situations.
I do wish he would lay low for some time and build up his power. Like why does he always keep trying to join/start a faction. He could wander for a while. And maybe even stockpile weapons in a hidden warehouse with his abilities.
This novel is kinda like Mediterranean hegemon of Ancient Greece. Even the start is the same except for the weird romance. If I recall the reason I dropped this was because of the romance. All in all nothing in the novel really made me keep reading. For example the Mc, side characters, Fl, the world. But that’s just me I’m sure others enjoy this.
Good job on the story, I like the time, it's part time, it doesn't look so cheap, the MC is fine, everything. What an excellent service.