meh, not good, but not the worst
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An elaborate story set in two conjoined worlds, virtual and reality come together to form the backdrop.
I think this is a pretty high quality book that deserves more than it gets.
I didn’t notice any major grammatical mistakes that would disturb the reading experience and enjoyed it through and through. So if you’re wavering to read this I think it’s at least worth to give it a try..
A quick summary of the review: It is a very good novel with a good chance to become a "great novel", the plot is unpredictable, the world is very wide, it's readable and the characters are interesting ( Just think about the lich and the puppeteer...)
I know that there are a lot of people that know how to write a review better than me but since there are only around 20 reviews on this novel I will try to write an accurate review for new readers...
Let's start with the best and more interesting parts of the novel... World background and Story development!
I must admit that this novel surprised me far more than I expected after reading the first chapters, besides, those surprises aren't something impossible to predict but at the same time, you won't be able to predict anything without understanding the characters' mindset.
The world background is also unique, the author was surely inspired by other novels but it is also clear that the result is surprisingly great, I must say that I don't like post-apocalypse yet I enjoy this one a lot, if you like fantasy novels and you are searching for something new, then this one is the novel you are searching!
There are a lot of sentients races like demons, elves, strange talking trees, beastmen, liches, and a lot more...
I don't know yet if there are other groups of races like the dark race that contains every creature capable to use dark essence, ( like demons, liches, cursed moon cats, etc..) but if there are, it would be even more interesting since our MC's faction have something like "limitless potential"? Well, not that I care about balance, our MC must defy the heavens with something OP after all.
Now, let's go on with the almost serious review! The character design is good with some little flows due to the inexperience of the author, but don't think that this is so bad!
have you ever tried to write a novel? Well, if the answer is not then let me tell you something, it's hard, very hard... It's rare to find a new author that can fluently change the character's behavior.
Well, our dear author failed a bit since it was a little forced but look at the bright side, he tried and I am confident that he will improve!
After all, everyone learns from his own mistakes, for this reason, if you find some actions a little forced, don't drop the novel right away, give it a chance to impress you.
Ok now, the main character isn't a mindless machine nor he is an honorable man with a normal mindset yet he is quite funny, I like his character, I don't know what other readers think about it but I can't help but smile and sometimes laugh more than usual while reading.
And here we are... at the bottom of the review and the nemesis of our almighty author-sama... The writing quality...
I know that there are a lot of novels with far more grammatical mistakes and I must admit that this one isn't too far from my bottom-line for grammatical mistakes yet it is readable and grammatical mistakes can always be fixed in the future, so don't lose hope, just pray that the author will somehow find some trustworthy proofreaders and everything will be perfect. Or that is what I always say to myself every time I find something that shouldn't exist...
Well, if someone is reading my review until this point, congratulations! You have surpassed my expectations since usually no one read my reviews... Okay, now that you learned everything about the novel, go, spread your wings and read this novel!
I hope you will enjoy it~
I honestly dont know why people say its just a ripoff of TBATE when it diverges midway and TBATE is also a ripoff of mushoku tensei (which is one of the best isekais and reincarnation stories along with rezero and both were the one the popularized the genre on the first place)
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Sky_Dragon_SlayerReplied
Oi dick face no need to be fuckin insulting. It's not the translators probs that you have - 1 comprehension. If you wanted the good novels to be release in the fuckin **** pool. Then you'll have to wait, there's many good novels out there in the original and translated sections. Give respect to the dude, since he do this for free.
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Da tats wat means slot taken( Delayed), Some times u have to translate for the translator
Nice actually..
Thanks for the story... Please do update and tell how u going to write do I can start following for update.✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
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don't understand the story and no background information sorry but not a story for me......（╯°□°）╯︵( .o.)（╯°□°）╯︵( .o.)（╯°□°）╯︵( .o.)
Honestly, I don't really want to make a review until there are more chapters, but brother author hasn't uploaded in a while and I worry that the author is unmotivated, so, I'll make a reveiw to hopefully convince him to satisfy his reader with another beautiful chapter. So far, it's a pretty nice fanfic. I like how the MC isn't straight off the back super sayan one punch man OP and is slowly building his power up. I don't really notice much grammer mistakes, and if there were, I was breezing through the chapters too fast to notice them. So far, there isn't much for me to say, but I really hope Author uploads more chapters. SCP novels are rare, so I cherish the few.
mc is supposed to be smart but all he does is court death, I'm not sure if he doesn't care or he just does not think at all. Another annoying one is his childhood sweetheart who keeps appearing throughout the novel just to threaten the mc or be annoying. honestly everything about this novel is just full of cliche and terribly written.