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why is this story chosen over Start With Contracting Sprites ???
Someone explain to me what I honestly don't understand.
Start With Contracting Sprites has more views, more ratings and stars. there's even another Korean novel that surpasses it in everything
Yo I was just vibing with the book till I get to chapter 5 and see this line. "The envious look in their eyes was exactly like African kids looking at europeans kids. Oh.....the desire, the hatred and the jealousy." I don't see how u can read garbage like that and just say ya this novel is good. Legit I like reading light novels but it's the blatant racism shown in some of them that ruin it for me. Just this line is a red flag and I honestly do not want to continue reading a book if it's just gonna piss me off with this type of nonsense later. If you finished reading this whole rant Thank you and good day to u sir/ma'am.
First of all, I like the title! It kinda reminds me of the book "I am number four". It also has a unique story line that the author described in the beginning of the chapter. That goes to show how dedicated he is (the author) to let, readers, know the world! Great job
(plus *coughs* the scratching of his balls WKKWKW) Overall I like how you explained the story and what they see. The only thing that I want to point out are the confusing words and sentences in the story. It didnt distrupted my journey, but it would be really nice if you could improve those few lines better!
Welp, no more FPs for me :(, anyway, you guys have to do with a summary/review of the novel of 36 chapters.
Mc reincarnated, gains a tracking system that can track everything without a limit within 10 meters and if he accomplishes certain milestones and achievements he can upgrade the range or he gains one-time use extended tracking range (for example: track within 10 km)
After mc eats a fruit that grants perfect body for cultivation he brokethrough to the first level and his 'action' took a turn as he acted like a refined person... Weird but okay, at least his personality didn't change.
Personality wise, a filial son who still remembers his parents after gaining cultivation. Of course he dumped them somewhere safe with some good friends he made to start his journey of cultivation with his 'good brother' he met.
Ah yes, in this novel the mc is OP compared to mortals for anyone wanting to know.
Translation Quality: 5* (It's nice to read)
SoU: 5* (Always, trial read - Qidian, son of bitches, bring back the 60 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!)
Story Development: 4* (I mean, it's going a good way)
Character Design: 4* (Yes, filial, not retarded, cautious and side characters have a nice solid personalities)
World Background: 3* (Yeah, not that much information, only the name of cities and their destinations. About cultivators is not much explained)
P.S And, I saw someone saying that the mc is a slave to the system. Some might be disgusted by such a thing and won't read this novel so let's clarify.
It's a tracking system, it's a system without many rules. The system DOESN'T give any quests nor any restrictions. The mc does whatever he wants.
Ok, there is also an another side to slave of the system and that is that some mcs relies too much on the system and that is true, but it happens in every novel and put your self in their shoes. A tracking system, is it something not to rely on? What can you do?
It's not like there is any rules of the system you can exploit as THERE ISN'T any restrictions.
Have a nice day everyone!
how can the main character be like that , what the story writer is thinking even if the mc wants money he can't say everything to others like that when they ask , atleast a few secrets should be kept to mc himself . how can he say about the assasination league with that shitty bitch when she asked , does he even had a brain , i don't like the story writer..............
This is definitely on of — if not the best — books on webnovel! Please release more!
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An engaging story that was very descriptive. The action scenes were explained well and I can see its potential. Not something that we can see every day. I am amazed by the author's writing style. Creative and imaginative. Kudos!
I like it, it has a cohesive plot for a smut story and good enough grammer, my only problem is that the plots can seem rushed at some points.
It starts off with our stereotypical MC, who is trash and bullied. However after a mysterious encounter with a meteorite he finds that his heart turned into a crystal..........
i am sorry to say that this week from friday the 16th
all the novel at trail are all not to my liking
sorry webnovel :( hope we can see much better novel soon
and i want to recommend with all my heart a novel that i can't leave and stop reading try at list 100 chapters and then you will understand way
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