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Absolutely terrible...
None of the characters make any sense. The way any of them act just fills me with disgust.
For example, early on the MC witnesses a robbery/attempted rape. He vaguely threatens the criminals who walk away because he's a witness. The victim asks his help to go to the police and he replies to her that since they didn't steal anything, she shouldn't bother and walks away.
To add insult to injury, he recognized the culprit since he works at the same place he does and doesn't seem to give a ****.
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author please keep releasing new chapters i need this novel as soon as possible, let author launch more chapters everything and just sensational in this novel I need a constancy of chapters please answer me.
I would say the story is interesting but the author just cut to the chase, from the boy reincarnating into another world to being able to cast spell within the first 2-3 hours, I had say the concept is rubbish
also the magic that took people years to learn only took him 2 hours.
The author should at least be considerate.
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I like the way you start your book and so far it seems like an interesting plot. One thing to take note of is to check the punctuations of some of your sentences. Some of them should be split up in smaller ones and others would need some commas. Aside from that, the writing quality is good. I can't say much else as you only have two chapters so far, but I'll keep on reading when you update more. Keep up the good work, author!
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try!
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I love the originality and the pure emotions put into this novel. This novel is definitely a tear-jerker and I hope that the slow-burn aspect of this novel will not throw you off. Thank you, author for the great story, I hope to read more in the future!
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The sweetest novel i ever read.I just want leon and carla grow quickly nad marry each other.??????????????????????????????