I need to talk about this one moment where Jiang Ran looks at Xia Chu and suddenly feels like she's his daughter. Like, what?? One minute he's this cool, untouchable bad boy type and the next his 'paternal instincts are kicking in.' The author really knows how to make you question what Jiang Ran actually feels. Is it protectiveness? Attraction? Confusion even on his own part? And then he goes ahead and eats an entire plate of vegetables — vegetables he HATES — just because she ordered them. Lin Yuqing's reaction was literally just 'damn' repeated multiple times and honestly same. The dynamic between them is so fascinating because on the surface Xia Chu seems completely submissive and well-behaved, but there are these tiny moments where she pushes back — like refusing to add him on WeChat, or calling the school uniform 'too ugly.' She's not as innocent as she appears, and Jiang Ran is clearly starting to sense that. That's what makes their relationship feel alive rather than one-dimensional.
Okay, so let me just say — the opening hook is *chef's kiss*. Su Wanqing gets electrocuted in her kitchen and wakes up inside a novel she stayed up reading the night before. Classic transmigration, sure, but the execution is tight. The author doesn't waste time — we're dropped right into the pivotal divorce scene within the first chapter, and suddenly Su Wanqing has to make a split-second decision: follow the original plot and end up miserable in the countryside, or fight back and claim the wealthy commander husband. The pufferfish poisoning subplot that kicks off in Chapter 2 is genuinely clever. Su Weiwei's scheme is layered — first she tries to sabotage the marriage by sowing discord, when that fails, she pivots to framing Su Wanqing for a criminal offense. The fact that she specifically chose pufferfish (which is notoriously dangerous) shows this wasn't a spur-of-the-moment plot. And the author plants the detail about Xiao Wu delivering firewood to Su Weiwei early enough that the reveal feels earned, not random. What I love is how the plot keeps escalating. Chapter 1: survive the divorce trap. Chapter 2: get framed for poisoning. Chapter 3: turn the tables in the Military Affairs Office. The stakes climb naturally, and each chapter ends on a note that makes you want to keep going. The only thing I'd note is that Su Wanqing's quick thinking in the office scene feels *slightly* too smooth — she's a fishing village girl who just transmigrated, yet she's already deploying cross-examination tactics like a seasoned lawyer. But honestly, I'll let it slide because the tension is so good.
great！I love it，very interesting haha ，yes！
i like the overview, the plot arrangement and character setting. Keep up the good work.
This is the kind of writing that sticks with you. Like I’ll be thinking about the skin walkers in that shrine next time I turn off the lights. THANKS FOR THAT ???
Hello, it's Author-sama here. I decided to rate my book because why not? A lot of writers are doing that, so here it is.The Next General is about politics, power, military, war, etc. Unfortunately, it's not BL, but who knows if I will end up adding one or two elements to it? It is clearly a historical drama with no rebirth or transmigration. It is about fictional history which I want to make realistic so no super elevated powers, and I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing this review. I love you all and please do leave a review and comments if you like how the story is progressing and again I love you.
Tbh, I am not that kind of guy who is interested in first pov novel, but this hidden gem is too much for me to ignore. I was immersed easily as I read the first chap, for the narrative flowed seamlessly. The translation was also flawless.I hope the author won't drop this.keep up the good work, author.
Totally not biased author here. I think I'm going to do a a good job.This is my first time writing but I hope you are able to enjoy this story. It is weird, and different from most other works in the site, so I understand if some of you don't like it. I'll be answering some questions you may have:Who is this work for? Fans of adventure, horror and dark fantasy genres I'd probably say. If you like the works i cite in the synopsis you'll probably enjoy the storyWill the protagonist be strong? All in due time, just wait and see. He won't start strong, though. He will have to rely on his wits to survive.Will there be romance? Not in the meantime. It is a lonely journey,Will there be action? Yes, the first chapters will be setting the mood of the story so they will be more adventure focused. There will be a fair share of fights though
I will review my novel?? this is an interesting novel that worth reading
"One of the best novels I have ever seen. The world-building and characters are absolutely perfect. It may seem similar to many other novels, but the author has clearly left their mark as the chapters progress. I just hope they maintain a stable release schedule."
trying but it's readable. she can try to update the book more regularly.
It's an amazing starting! Can't wait for more updates.