Okay, So far im about 15 chapters in. These are short chapters but i don’t hate it. Warning to future readers, author uses “and” a lot so i am guessing english insnt their first language. From what i have read so far I think it is pretty good for what it is.
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Op MC
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nice plot hope it continues .................................................................................................................
It is a good story for binge read...
story development is slow ..
when will author introduce alll...
until now it is shown that sister come in mc room to get check in and mc distribut system and get rewards .. typical urban chinese story
I was expecting more character development before the protagonist’s easy win. The main character had no police/law enforcement/ forensic training before transmigrating with a detective system golden finger. In the first case, the golden finger replayed the whole murder before the protagonist put in any effort. Then, his boss agreed to arrest the suspect with out a warrant or any direct evidence in hand (Cultureal Differences?). I would have preferred if the system only told him that a murder occurred and then forced the protagonist to solve the rest himself. Bottom line the protagonist’s golden finger made him look cool to other characters but did not cause any personal growth.
this novel is really mind blowing. I hope the update would be up the pace .very exciting, educative and inspiring.i would like to read more books from this Arthur
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I would like to apologize to the Author for my previous review. I did not read enough, and made my mind about the whole novel. This is very good and cultured novel. Plot and cultivation is hella interesting. I really hope you did not dropped it. Im about to join premium chapters to leave some support. Keep it up and thanks.
I love where the story is heading and where it is currently. I would hate for the story to stop updating, that is just how good this novel is.
Keep up the good work
Pls dont quit the book
Really good besides the writing quality which is quite poor............................................,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,..,.,