The Story is interesting but it's difficult to read so i am gonna stop reading unfortunately. .
While there is world building at the start, the introduction of Xing Tian as the ‘Asian girl’ is a bit disconnected in the first two chapters. It is systematically written and there is a lot of hard work done on the novel. The novel probably belongs to the cyberpunk genre . Just a personal opinion on my part, it is a nuance but each new character generation tend to be a little choppy at the start. This choppiness isn’t a grammatical issue but rather how the content flows. Fight/combat scenes while described, requires more action, shorter description to give it an ‘action’ feel. However it is my personal preference. Others may prefer in depth descriptions. Overall, nice work!
book is filled with horror, only a few chapters and and i am already scared.
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I'm giving up on this story improving in the late 400s (476 I think) and I'll say with a bit of bitterness that the sunk cost kept me reading much longer than curiosity or continued interest.The passive system in the earlier chapters is, while not original, it was not overpowered. There was potential for the system to develop and at points the system was expanded upon but at several turns those developments were abandoned entirely. By later chapters, drawing is arbitrary- there are detailed chapters of MC analyzing their current build, pointing out where the system has yet to completely break with the world building only for the system to give a handout at that exact moment...By then the MC is already jumping realms and tanking would-be threats so the introduction of more passive skills at that point is just padding and fluff. A number of story threads get abandoned early that, in my personal opinion, would have been more entertaining to read than a repeat of new city where everyone is stronger and geniuses scoff at MCs powerlevel. MC character development is something like going from just trying to survive, to planning to live long enough for the system to produce hundreds of skills, to a sense of self-awareness that their situation is constant danger and death is real possibility (if you allow a suspension of disbelief) and then finally having a ridiculous extra life and throwing caution to the wind.Highly disappointed in a work of fiction that shows a bit of self-awareness regarding common tropes in this sort of cultivation-based world building but still follows the template/formula and lets whatever originality it had at the start completely collapse on itself.
Wow. I like how you started this novel! Amazing work! I'd rarely read an ML book, but the details you gave in the starting scene was so vivid. Even I'm not good at vivid scenes. I couldn't stop reading. Even though it was a fighting scene, I liked it very much. Very good author. I'd continue to read the novel. Please update!
Thank you for the story, i enjoy it a lot
Please,where are the rest?I sincerely love the story and would like to know every detail of Lin Ming's astonishing journey.Just release the rest of the story for us mere mortals.
Love how this story is not a reincarnation novella. The plot is so interesting, I couldn't stop reading. Much better grammar and writing than many stories I've seen on here.
Overall just a nice break away from a female lead being interested in only romance. I am definitely enjoying the luxurious season of unrestrained energy from the book.
I, for one, really like this story so I hope that it will not be dropped and be continued until it ends. Though there are things that need to be improved the author still did a good job in his work. Just some edits and it will be great, so all I could say is - Great Work!