One of the worst novels I have seen in a long time. The author did a complete disservice to the concept of the novel/synopsis, since those sounded like they could be interesting
Just wanted to say I voted for Gaara, not the synopsis. I mean really, what can we tell from that thing. For all I know, he was a demon accidentally summoned to earth from another world and his ambitions are to develop the world's most popular cafe. Well, Daoist Jie cleared things up already, but still - 3-
Best for summoners fiction!!
But the bad thing is the update is so slow!
We love ur story and need daily chap!!
But well we got our Life to go on, so just keep update when you can
great story so far! mc def frustrated me a bit in the begining because of his 'idiocy', which got a very good reason layer down the line.spoiler alert:really like the esteregg with gaavah being pride in hebrew (:
What happened to this novel and the author???
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excellent book appreciate the expérience thank.... the mc is ok .i'm in chapter 42.........…................................................
The language used in the synopsis creates some tension that could engage the readers.You make use of adjectives to your advantage by writing them in the right places, giving information about the characters without having to straight up describe It to the readers.The presentations of the Suryavanshi family (aside from the protagonist) are not introduced smoothly in the story. The writing acomplishes to transmit fairly the personality and emotions from the protagonist.It manages to make the reader wonder about the main character's past as It seems to be something that still has relevance in the present.The two last paragraphs shift from ,1srt to 3rd person in narration and It appears a tad disruptive even if the paragraphs in itself are wonderful.While the different narrators and their personalities can easily be distinguished by what's written, the main tool used is plainly explaining everything they think and how they are, and therefore the story's pace becomes quite slow. However, I appreciate that the male narrator gives off the impression that he's somewhat poetic or romantic a side from being hurt. Mostly for the way he talks, and the reader is subtlely warned of his extremism/desperation.The story could benefit from some more little actions that show the reader how they are. In the chapters that follow (chp. 4 and up) the depiction of personality, opinion and vibe improves and the main character's develope more!Seems like drama and catastrophe are about to happen at any time!
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1.is this a big harem?
2.will she guard and protect her harem? 3.does it contain NTR?
1.is this a big harem?
2.will she guard and protect her harem? 3.does it contain NTR?
Started reading this morning and I'm already on Ch.10 :D I'm hyped for every chapter and can't wait to see what happens next each time. Despite this being the first webnovel I've read (i'm usually reading webtoons LOL), I'm actually pretty invested 0v0. The imagery is clear and descriptive and I have fun picturing the world in my head. Keep it up dude! ^^
This is an honest review. I really like what has been done so far and I cannot wait for more. This story is unique in how it defers from the usual transmigrate/pickup system plot. The system (treasure chests) is definitely refreshing and the MC is OP but not overly so. The MC is not some flat, ugrade obsessed virgin, but he has “character” has a relationship that adds significantly to the plot in addition to the MC’s own plans. This MC is able to evolve as the story progressess, changing plans as he goes along. There is still some much room left to grow for this story and the possibilities are endless. I really am excited for what is to come. You won’t regret, and it is definitely worth, at least giving this story a solid try. So come along with me for the ride and journey the awaits ahead in the uncertain but bright furture.
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This is one of my first real reviews of a novel. I really hope you enjoy this as much as I have. And if you dont like or agree with what is said, please let me know so that I can gain a better perspective on what others may think of this novel. As well as my novice but, never the less, honest review
This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................