Re: The Dark Lord’s Ascension

I can't give the best review since there are only a few chapters, but so far, I love this story. I saw a few grammatical mistakes so that's good. I like the characters however I hope they can be a bit more fleshed out through the story. I can't say much about the world background since it's not fully explained. However, this is a great story and I can't wait for more!

Loved reading it will be waiting for the 2nd Chapter keenly …superbly written  very well expressed, suspense on each line of the story overall a beautifully thought story

" Oh shit, Oh shit, Oh shit, Oh shit, Oh shit! "

Although the English teacher did not have any real weapon, when she hits your forehead because you misbehave or forgot to complete her homework, it can really sting and make you red for a least 3 days. As for the P.E. teacher, unlike the English and Japanese teacher, who only had a fearsome reputation among the upperclassmen, children in every grade fears him. It doesn't matter who you are, the minute you enter the school and meet this teacher, you will automatically fear him, because this teacher carries around a meter stick and will hit you, either on your hands or your bottom, the minute he sees you misbehaving.

Baldroy: There was a lot of meat to be cooked for dinner, and it was gonna take a long time, so uh, I used me flamethrower.

From a certain viewpoint, that sort of thinking is not wrong. Because I have been digging traps here.