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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
this is basically a chinese novel... 80% info, 20% story..... basically a book full of information and barely a story... it even cuts from the main character to an irrelivant npc.... best not to read this book as it sux at keeping the flow of the story and descends to giving info dumps to up the word count
I have read far enough to know the world background, but it's very limited by the sounds of it, and the MCs character is horrendous, unlikable, and really who wants to read about loner that thinks he is better then everyone else, with no intention of making any friends, he is rude and literally the one person everyone given a chance would punch in the face.
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Unique plot l must say.... haven't read this kind of book before because l am a romantic book lover.... But l wanted to come out of my comfort zone and so read this book....I should say it is a very interesting book... Who ever likes to read war, mission, fighting type of books can read it.... It won't bore you....There are some problem with the writting mannagment but l hope author gonna correct it as author is a new writter..... All the very best....
The story itself is a wonderful concept, a splicing of a super scientific world with a fantasy world. The problem is execution. The story reads as if it’s being written by someone with English as their second language or straight from voice diction. The characters have weak impressions and the story rambles around with events and character actions that don’t really make much sense. There are some redeeming qualities however as the author often avoids common tropes (through design or mistake I can’t tell) and takes time to go back and review his work. Best of all he keeps to his release schedule.
I have to say it simply since I can’t write a super long review so I’ll keep it short. This was amazing. Don’t judge the book from just reading the first few chapters. It isn’t basic. It has a refreshing plot and characters. Her writing greatly improves over the course of the book, so don’t be so harsh during the very first chapters. Her writing never deteriorated and only kept improving! The character development is amazing and it she actually tells many stories of many people in this one novel. That is what I like. She focuses and building every character. She writes of beautiful values and morals too. It makes me respect her as more than just a writer but a person. The story really has a a great plot. It isn’t as simple as you’d guess by reading only the start. You have to read the whole thing to be able to know what’ll happen. It’s the type of plot that keeps you guessing. In no way is this like any other historical novel. It’s wonderful and new. Like a breath of fresh air. I loved reading this and I’ve reread it at least four times! I really recommend it.
It is simply perfect. No unwanted bull—t and dragging dramas. Friendship, sibling love, trust and unconditional love. No white lotuses. Never been so real.
Why was this not chosen? It’s a great novel. I’m currently on chapter 22 and you can really see the protagonists growth, both in strength and as a person.
Great book in terms of world building and realistic characters, there are some big issues with spelling and grammar as well as the characters lack of imagination to the point where the readers feel embarrassed for him. Worth a read purely because of the world building