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Woow man!! You really good. Big ups. such great creativity and the way you merge everything is pretty awesome. The book is really good and am addicted to every chapter in the book. Hope you complete whatever you doing and update it more and more. Cause man!! The book is awesome
Nice Novel, hope this gets picked....______________________________________________________________________________________________________
The writing quality is terrible. This could be such a great novel if they author actually knew how to write a story. So many repetitive words, sentences that make no sense, and lacking metaphors. It’s honestly unfortunate because this book could have potential if it was written by someone else. I rate 1.5 stars, literally hurts my brain trying to read this book.
The police needs to know where these trash parents are.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Amazing novel with a good plot. I highly recommend it because the chapters are enjoyable to read and the flow of the story is good. I didn’t see any bad stuff on the MC or the characters around him. Eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters
This is good keep up the good work author.and if you can.....MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEMORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEMORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEMORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEMORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEEalso....Thank you for your excellent work!!!
Loved it...but it just....the plot needs to be more original ...not the main plot but the sub plots...if you konw what i mean. and also the writing quality needs to be somewhat improve.
[The First Volume] Just short of 5 stars.STORY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). The story is mediocre and can be best described as uninteresting but understandable.Pros:*There are clear objectives*well-defined setting*Imaginative details.Cons:*Slow-paced tells your generic plot. Thirty chapters for three plot points; doesn't happen as much in later volumes.WORLD BACKGROUND ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). What were they doing while they were speaking, what environment are they in, how cold is the water? Long descriptions are a no-go, but no descriptions are worse than that. They do try though, in the first volume where he was in the cave, they had descriptions and so on, but things get cloudy when the wording comes into play.WRITING QUALITY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (four stars). It isn't that bad; there are some issues with the wording here and there, but everything's grammatically correct.UPDATE STABILITY ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (5 stars).CHARACTER DESIGN ⭐️⭐️⭐️ (three stars). There isn't much attention to other characters apart from the main character, but I hear it gets changed later.
it was amazing at first but when the newer chapters starting from new its just gotten very confusing if you can can you please correct the chapters as I really enjoyed it at in point
somewhat good from the start but later ison in the story, mc will become s7tupid which are the cases of some novel that has overpowered chrcterstics and strng backer in it. he doesn't think about the consequences of his action which is stupid. he always creates problems. if only in the story some of his love ones died and mature that is best.
so overallthe story is okay the plot is okay, only mc has iq problem.
Honestly, the story is great, the development is good, the world building is subpar BUTTT, BUTTT THE TRANSLATION IS BLOODY HOORIBLE, LIKE, ITS BASICALLY A TRASHY MTL COPY PASTE